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OPR Writing Jam #5

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A jam submission

ROAD TRAINView project page

A Short and Snappy story regarding Dwarf Bikers.
Submitted by Notorgo — 4 hours, 43 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Concept & Originality#143.8423.842
Overall#183.6143.614
Flow & Clarity#213.5793.579
Adherence to the Theme#223.4213.421

Ranked from 19 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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lalo.morningstarSubmitted1 year ago

yeah! Space dwarfs!

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A child of the pack
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HewJaxTheLivingFranchiseSubmitted1 year ago

Booo! Dwarves! *Hides own mantic collection of Forgefather models from sight* Good story though. Hope it has a sequel from the Orc p.o.v. where they kick Dwarf butt. ;p

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Do it with flare - One Page Rules Writing Jam #5 submission
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small_grey_owlSubmitted1 year ago

And who says dwarves don't know how to party?

In all seriousness, though, this was a nicely-done, very straightforward piece that said what it had to say and didn't overstay its welcome.

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Desperate Times
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JoeSubmitted1 year ago

As was already mentioned, nice Mad Max vibe! Would need some rewrites (some repeating words etc.) and expanding a bit, but good otherwise!

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OPR Writing Jam #5 - Bells
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TheFomorianSubmitted1 year ago

Fast, loud and dusty! That's everything you need for a good Road trip! Well executed :)

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The drunkard
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ironpinestudiosSubmitted1 year ago

Gorkamorka meets Necromunda squats, love the western/post apocalyptic vibe

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The Parable of Two Swordsmen
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notimeforwargamesSubmitted1 year ago

Love the high energy in this story!

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OPR Writing Jam #5 - An Admiral's Pride
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Hobby FuzionSubmitted1 year ago(+1)

LOL suddenly I had this image of Mad Max dwarves; very concise word count.

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A Mother's Vengence
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