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Thanks for your feedback and kind words. Yeah you're right, I wanted to connect back to his dream and showing the spiritual side of things, as the main character has a connection to the grove/clover and nature. Because of the limitation of words, I had to remove some words/sentences before submitting. Maybe I should have explained this connection a bit more, but wanted the reader to decide what made him accomplish this adventure aka the mead, luck or something else 😊

Funny, unique, stick to the theme plus Orcs, that's a win - win for me! Cool story with a nice twist! :D

Very unique story and theme with a nice twist :)

Fast, loud and dusty! That's everything you need for a good Road trip! Well executed :)

That was a nice read and full of atmosphere, as you want to know what it is all about. Nice writing style choosing the perspective of the main character telling the story. Reminds me a bit of the Eisenhorn novels :)

This was a nice and very atmospheric read. The pen is mightier than the sword -  lesson learned. :)

Cool story and great build up of tension. You really want to know what's going on and get to the solution. It reminds me a bit of the Two Towers where Gandalf saved Helms Deep by arriving early in the morning with a rescue force :) 

Well done!

Great main character and you can almost feel his pain. A kind of sad story, where the law seems to be unadapted for ages.

You can almost feel the grim dark setting and the story was quite cruel. I thought the Militia would have a chance at all :)

That was a funny read and a nice twist also. You can really feel Whaazoo's panic, try to sell some stuff.