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A jam submission

Desperate and DustyView project page

A Jackal Mercenary and a TAO Commander plan an escape from an Alien Hive world. Written for the OPR Writing Jam #5
Submitted by capnwaylark — 13 hours, 43 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Concept & Originality#64.2224.222
Flow & Clarity#84.0004.000
Adherence to the Theme#104.0004.000
Overall#104.0744.074

Ranked from 18 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Comments

Submitted

May be a bit harsh but i feel like i've read this sort of story before.

Submitted(+2)

I enjoy stories like this one that really fill out the OPR lore, great characters with some great interactions between them, thanks for the cool story. 

Submitted(+1)

Great world building.

Submitted(+1)

I enjoyed this story very much, especially Moonbiters name and doglike actions 

Submitted(+1)

I really like this story. The growing trust between the two leaders and the clever potential solution to fighting the swarm was very cool. I don't think showing the final confrontation even mattered... the real story is the friendships we made along the way :P

Submitted(+1)

You did a great job anchoring the story in the GdF setting just with Moonbiter's equipment. Everything flowed nicely and the ending was a great cliffhanger.

Developer

Thanks. I meant to contrast them with Mir'Zam's pristine advanced equipment, but had to cut down for wordcount :P

Submitted(+1)

I feel you there; the wordcount was my worst enemy this time around.

Submitted(+1)

Nice world-building and good use of contrasting factions to enhance the theme.

Developer

Thanks! I had an interest in using TAO and Jackals even before the theme was revealed, and turns out Jackals are prefect for the prompt!