Good stuff. I liked the characters, they had some real heart to them, but it could have used a couple of revisions for typos etc.  Great stuff

There's a lot of good elements here, I liked the interactions between the characters. You showed that the sergeant was really just a prison officer, the bickering on number of ratmen. The general feeling of disorganisation felt like this was a bit of a penal unit rather than a fully fledged combat squad.

Nice work!

Glorious Rat-story. I could spot a typo every now and then, but it was clear enough.
Good entry, well done!

I thought it was nice and to the point. I always like the Rats. 

Rats! I enjoyed the action of the story. It was concise and easily readable.