I like this adventure a lot! There's so much to explore and expand on, in the one page, that I think it would provide quite a bit of play time. The art and the whole vibe is cool, reminds me of MCC. Well written and the layout style works great for a one page adventure. The one minor point to bring up is that the derelict doesn't seem to be (necessarily) the center point to the adventure... I still love it.
Good worldbuilding here; layout's a bit scattered. It's a little hard to tell "actual map" pieces from the background/additional imagery. (But it does add nicely to the feel of the module.) I like that it works even if the players have seen it - knowing there's a Jaw Beast to deal with won't make that any easier.
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Very cool setting and artwork. Interesting twist where the derelict isn't the main area for the adventure.
Fantastic! It manages to include a lot of story and flavor. I love how the beautiful illustrations blend with the maps making a unified piece.
I like this adventure a lot! There's so much to explore and expand on, in the one page, that I think it would provide quite a bit of play time. The art and the whole vibe is cool, reminds me of MCC. Well written and the layout style works great for a one page adventure. The one minor point to bring up is that the derelict doesn't seem to be (necessarily) the center point to the adventure... I still love it.
Bonus points for naming the creature a "jaw beast". So wonderfully to the point.
It's fantastic! Wow! Beautiful map, great hook, great story and a lot to do around there. I will definitely try this one out!
Good worldbuilding here; layout's a bit scattered. It's a little hard to tell "actual map" pieces from the background/additional imagery. (But it does add nicely to the feel of the module.) I like that it works even if the players have seen it - knowing there's a Jaw Beast to deal with won't make that any easier.