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This adventure looks like a ton of fun. Great color palette and fantastic map!

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Original concept, beautiful cover and clever visual layout and a pointcrawl-like diagram to ascend to the goal. As it was discussed in previous comments, probably adding something like "level 1", "level 2", etc, to the 3 stairs symbols would make it even clearer. But this is a really cool idea, putting the PCs in a very specific and uncommon role as guardians of the fountain. Great work!

Thanks! I'm glad you like it! :-D

Thanks so much for your detailed feedback! You are right, it's very likely that the PCs side with the first faction/NPC they encounter. I guess the GM has to make the NPCs very persuasive to create some kind of twist. Again thanks for taking the time, I'm glad you liked it! 🙏🏼

Nice! A village trying to survive a typhoon in Japan. I really like the fact that there is no epic goal, but rather the fury of the elements provides enough of a challenge to drive the narrative. The village and its inhabitants reminded me of the novel "Village of Eight Gravestones" by Seishi Yokomizo.
The only tiny thing I would revise is the names (I might be nitpicking here): although they are references to the myth, I think it's unlikely that they would name their kids with Shinto gods' names, which seems too grandiose for Japanese culture and feels a bit odd. Also, the name of the temple Inari feels like a missed opportunity since there are no elements related to foxes.
Good, evocative module!

Interesting module with a beautifully crafted side-view map and an original time-shifting mechanic. Clear descriptions and plenty to explore in each room.

An elegant take on the mythology from the Mediterranean Sea, with a very good layout. I love those legendary artifacts.

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Yes, I agree with you. Walking the same path again and again is in fact how roguelikes work, learning and improving every time. Makes sense.

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Agree about the doppelgangers: imagine if by chance somehow a PC gets swapped with one of them and turn into bread, could be a lot of fun.

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I appreciate your support! I'm happy you like it.

Thanks! I'm glad you like it. Initially the dungeon was more linear, so I added those loops to make it more fun and not so predictable, I even wanted to connect the last room with other, but didn't find a simple way to do it.

Thanks! I'm glad you like it! 🦊

Very cool concept and innovative mechanics! Also the layout is super clear, thematic and easy to read. Great work!

Nice and low-prep dungeon with classic vibes! 👌

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Oh no... I missed this post! I fixed some typos and the map's bg color for better readability. Is there any way to fix this — like reuploading the initial version? (I kept version 1.0.). I wouldn't want to be left out because of this silly mistake 🙏🏼

Beautiful gothic adventure with touches of humor. The theme and visual style stays consistent throughout the entire module, and the reading is very enjoyable. Great piece!

Good premise for an adventure. And I like the evocative artwork in the hexes. I agree with the previous comment: probably a slightly smaller font (10 or 11pts) and larger line-spacing would improve readability.

Nice! Good MB omens, an eerie cast and lots of creepy masks.

Thanks! I'm glad you like it.
Yes, poor Dunmore is the only innocent one in this mess.

Gracias Seba! :-D

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A solo game with interesting mechanics. I still have to run it to have a better idea of the flow, but it looks very cool. And the visuals are thematic and functional.

Original illustrations and a fantastic color palette. I love that this module can be used with any map. Very creative and unique style!

Wow that's great, I'm sure you're the first person to run it! In the rush to finish it before the deadline, I just uploaded it without having the chance to playtest it.
I'm so happy you like it! many thanks.

Great adventure, as always!

• It's the first time I've seen "2:6" for "2-in-6", really clever! I'll use it in mine too :-)
• I love the movement restriction rule! Although I'm not sure whether a darker hex means that has actually less light. Not sure how to interpret "All light shines only towards the Gravity Well"; does it mean that you only see outer hexes bright when seen from the inner (darker) hexes?
• A tiny usability idea: since the PCs always start in 3.3, that hex could be marked somehow. Or perhaps on every cycle they could restart in a random outer hex.
• The cyclical nature of the adventure is a really cool idea, reminds me a roguelike videogamemechanic, and the variety of scenes in the key hexes is fantastic 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

Nice art! Very well chosen color palette.

Thanks so much! :-)

Thanks! I'm glad you like it. I would like to trim the Background section even more, to be ready to run in 5 min   :-D 

Thanks for your comment, I'm glad you like it! Yes, fitting all the descriptions into a small space was quite a challenge.

Thanks! :-)

Thanks! I'm glad you like it :-)

This is really cool! love the concept.

Cool zine!

Thanks for your kind words. I'm glad you like the style  :-)

Great! :-D