The core idea is good and works well. All it needs is ~presentation~! I think the other comments gave some good suggestions

I like simple when the feel of the game is there to compliment the simple game play. Even little things like sound and music would instantly elevate the experience. Still, submitting something is half the battle so congrats on putting something together that definitely matches the theme :)

A bit too simplistic. May be with some more momentum, camera shakes and a background could be a fun simple game. But you did complete a game jam, so congratulations on that :)