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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Theme | #4 | 4.476 | 4.476 |
| Narration | #5 | 4.524 | 4.524 |
| Overall feeling | #15 | 4.095 | 4.095 |
| Originality | #16 | 4.095 | 4.095 |
Ranked from 21 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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I love all the extra care that went into this, from the title page that includes relevant hyperlinks and has a flavourful start button to the different colour stylings for speakers. It's always little touches like these that turn something good into something great.
I think what strikes me about this one the most is that it reads like you've very much enjoyed writing it.
Heh, yeah, who’d have thought it’d be a blast to write something with fucking Olivia Wood, huh?
(Thanks so much, pal. <3)
This was really good! The narration is funny and witty, all the characters all have their own voice. I loved it.
really good fun! humorous and carefree, but holds onto a bit of sincerity in the strong character personalities. great use of the theme!!
The moment I read the words "cock up" I knew I was going to love this. This was beautifully written and when I heard about a heist, this is not kind I was expecting AT ALL.
This was really fun to play!
As it has been the case on everything I've read from you, the main strength and the thing that just can't be beat in your stories is the damn PERSONALITY. Like, god damn it, these no good criminals had more charisma in this tiny fragmentary story than some villains in current movies : D and I love it!! The tension in the actual heist was great too! But I have to admit, I was more lost and deeply invested in the pre-heist banter.
What I have to say as a non-native english speaker is that the slang got a bit heavy to understand in some points @-@ But that is my problem really, not yours.
All and all, great and fun little adventure!!
Loved it! Great little slice-of-heist, enjoyable use of tropes and a pro-union Guv'. The writing was paced well which made reading this a pleasure. Enjoyed the different colours for the different characters, made it easier to give them all voices!