I won't lie at first I only made it through one loop and then was gonna leave feedback saying "eh sound and visuals were pretty neat but visual novel/interactive fiction type games were never my thing". And while thats still the case I think this game went far further with the time looping fourth wall breaking stuff than any other jam game I've played. It was really cool, especially when I tried to get around the game by refreshing the page (which of course didn't work).

I do agree with the previous comments about shortening up some of the opening text blocks though, it can be quite a bit to read all in one go.

So while its still not my preferred genre of games (even VN or interactive fiction games with great writing and voice acting made by friends aren't especially my preference), I found it intriguing. Good work!

The sound and visuals are good. The issue I have is the text. Too much text is hard to read... Make text blocks shorter. One or Two sentences. This way, If you are like me, you can browse through the text without reading the entire thing and still understand what is going on. Also revealing the text, like letter by letter, with an option to speed it up will also be a nice feature. These little things will help this game a lot, especially as it is a text game.