Some graphics would definitely help I couldn't read the whole story and check everything. But it's a good start Congrats !!

Congratulations to your first game and game jam. I am not a huge fan of text based games, but I really liked you writing style. I did not play the whole game, but very cool that you have different endings! Keep on making games :).

Pretty interesting writing!

I know the game is supposed to be story-driven, but always reading a story can get repetitive game-loop wise. I would add images to look at and maybe minigames spread around (sounds corny, but a lot of text-based games do that to keep the game loop going, otherwise always doing the same thing gets boring)

Congrats on submitting to the game jam!

This is a new idea. I like the music too!

It won't let me type anything in the pass word box. Am I missing something?

Pretty good run at setting the mood. Only thing that really bothered me was the text off the top of the monitor the whole game. I got stuck on the reviewing camera footage and 2 theories of how subject 278 escape screen. There was no back button and Escape key didn't work either.

Maybe u can make the text shorter cus it is a little boring now