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A jam entry

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My Entry for the Itch.io composer jam. hope to get some feedback
Submitted by tm0 with 14 hours, 20 minutes before the deadline


CriteriaRankScore*Raw score
Mixing and Mastering#83.3753.375
Rhythm and Pacing#93.1253.125

Ranked from 8 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.


I can agree with most of what's been said already. I like the first half of the song more than the second. They kind of feel like two different pieces. The song could have ended at 1:47 and been a really good piece. Thanks for submitting and well done!

Simple but very effective. Not too keen on the final male vocals - could have been omitted or made further back into the mix .

Last segment could have had a better build up and finale. But I liked it

Nice harmony, though a little boring and not well defined melody. The second part is worse than intro and lacks an aggression to bring fear/epicness to listener. Mastering is ok except that second part.

Overall, nice work, comrade!

cinetic (View their submission) · 296 days ago

It's good if a bit repetitive. The brass that plays the melody in the second part is a bit inconsistent in volume and velocity.

you have some nice ideas and harmonies in here! there are some parts where it becomes a bit repetitive, so maybe an area of improvement can be developing your ideas further and varying them to keep the listener engaged.

Exkekx (View their submission) · 296 days ago

jeez dont let your emotions stream through the music so freely, you need to concentrate more

krzyzis · 296 days ago


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