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A jam entry

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My Entry for the Itch.io composer jam. hope to get some feedback
Submitted by tm0 with 14 hours, 20 minutes before the deadline

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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw score
Melody#63.3753.375
Harmony#63.3753.375
Motifs#73.2503.250
Overall#73.3003.300
Mixing and Mastering#83.3753.375
Rhythm and Pacing#93.1253.125

Ranked from 8 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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I can agree with most of what's been said already. I like the first half of the song more than the second. They kind of feel like two different pieces. The song could have ended at 1:47 and been a really good piece. Thanks for submitting and well done!

Simple but very effective. Not too keen on the final male vocals - could have been omitted or made further back into the mix .

Last segment could have had a better build up and finale. But I liked it

Nice harmony, though a little boring and not well defined melody. The second part is worse than intro and lacks an aggression to bring fear/epicness to listener. Mastering is ok except that second part.

Overall, nice work, comrade!

It's good if a bit repetitive. The brass that plays the melody in the second part is a bit inconsistent in volume and velocity.

you have some nice ideas and harmonies in here! there are some parts where it becomes a bit repetitive, so maybe an area of improvement can be developing your ideas further and varying them to keep the listener engaged.

jeez dont let your emotions stream through the music so freely, you need to concentrate more

Nice!!