Awesome motifs, awesome arrangement. Some instruments mixed not very perfectly, and the sound is somewhat dissonantive (especially the second part), but I like this track. Great work!
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Try add some background instruments, try to work with notes velocity, give some expression.
Also master the mastering - add delay+reverb and this track will sound a lot more interesting.
I have lost the rhythm ~after 1:40, and melody was unclear from the beginning to the end.
But, never stop trying, you just have to practice.
Simple, but kinda beatiful. Nice balance between boring-and-simple and interesting-but-complicated. A bit repetitive motif, no background instruments (ambient and maybe some percussions), and the flute is a little too close, but the track is very enjoyable and can fit the videogame perfectly.
Nice harmony, though a little boring and not well defined melody. The second part is worse than intro and lacks an aggression to bring fear/epicness to listener. Mastering is ok except that second part.
Overall, nice work, comrade!