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A jam entry

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a soundtrack
Submitted by jaredsviolin with 4 days, 9 hours before the deadline

Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw score
Harmony#93.0003.000
Overall#102.7202.720
Rhythm and Pacing#112.8002.800
Melody#112.8002.800
Mixing and Mastering#132.2002.200
Motifs#132.8002.800

Ranked from 5 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Comments

I agree with marisalovesusall. The song has some potential behind it. But it needs a LOT of mixing. Take some time to learn how velocity, modulation, and expression work and use them in your piece. You could also stand to add some more instrumentsβ€”a bit of percussion, more strings, some woodwinds or brass.

Nice motifs and harmony, though a little repetitive. Badly mixed expression, and boring arranging.

Has potential, will be a really awesome track after some rework.

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