Thanks guys! I appreciate the comments. Cinetic, how would you recommend combating the mechanical-ness of it? Also, I'm relatively new to orchestral composition, I wrote my first piece in June. What's a normal velocity for a harp? Or do you just mean that it's too soft/loud in some parts and/or covered by the piano in some parts?

This composition is fine, but it's a bit mechanical, thus it couldn't really convey to me the sense of mystery it tried to achieve.

The harp's velocity is also off, some keys almost can't be heard (or they are covered by the piano), others are a bit too loud.

beautiful! minor 1: chords at the beginning are kind of random, minor 2: violins that come in at the end are unsure of what mood they are creating, seems to switch bw light and evil. Otherwise really professionally & lovingly made, good melodies, motifs are exciting, chords, mixing, everything.