I didn’t like it very much. I found the plot wanting and the dialogue not too interesting. I believe that had it made the most out of its historical setting and really leveraged the struggles of your average housewife trying to make a living, it’d be a great story. But as it stands, I don’t find it great.

So I gave it a poor review on Kratzen, and please do not think I am disrespecting you or your ancestors by criticising your work. It’s a noble thing you’ve made, and I hope you make more appealing work on the subject matter in the future.