Firstly, a great first effort! Please know my feedback is meant to be helpful and constructive. I sincerely hope that my comments did not discourage you or upset you in any way. Just want that to be super clear.

I'm going to give this 4 stars for now, please see the comment on the game's page. If you address the issues I outline I would be happy to take a look again and change to a 5 star rating :)

Additionally, you might want to share this on Reddit at r/solorpgplay and r/solo_roleplaying. These communities may also just be of interest to you.