Promising story premise. 

There is a lot of the game that's only described with words & not shown in visuals/animations. Lame

Incredibly off-putting that gaining affection with one girl lowers it with others

What is with the one-sided conversations? Girls will ask a question and just keep on talking - no response from MC 

Seriously? MC keeps his helmet on in h scenes - so dumb

The amount of times that Elphy sighs is annoying as hell

 Are you kidding me? The first h scene with Laila was good when MC was having sex with her but then it was completely ruined by the foot job

Elphy: too willful, proper, & annoying

Laila: too cocky & headstrong

Khaji: yeah-no. she attempts to be possessive of MC, it should be the other way around with MC dominating her and her eagerly accepting it

Serena: holy shit she's annoying with how she tries to be dominant - what the hell alt f4