Weird, i didn't get the story at all, also your prologue is faulty, only in the last sentance you get the information that july is in the hospital, but the second sentence says to bring her home(but from where?), some people might miss that clue. I really liked the graphics. Also, i don't know if its a bug or not, but when i started the game, it said "Chapter 3", and no other chapters were shown until the end of the game.
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