Story 4/5

Story Pacing 5/5

Characters 4.5/5

Character Development 4/5

Renders 4/5

Overall 4.5/5

My only complaint is the cliffhanger ending to chapter 2. I know you wanted to to build suspense for the next chapter but to me it makes no sense considering the context of the memories of the "accident". I have some theories about what is actually going on but it's too early to tell if I'm right. I'll let the mystery rest for now. I'm eagerly awaiting the next release.