Hi,

Thank you for this lovely story! I appreciated every minute of it. It was relaxing, touching, and pretty beautiful all around. I really liked the visual art and the music as well.

I'm taking 1 star out for the typos, and also for a glitch that would make the game freeze for a few seconds at several points in the game.  Is a new version in the works? I guess you must have noticed most of the typos by now. As for the latter issue, maybe updating the game to the latest version of Renpy would be enough; there have been some performance improvements since then.

See you! :)