Well done job here! I sure enjoy some exploration game, and the switching avatars makes this one quite fun.
Maybe you should consider adding some music for different areas. Really nice overview effect

Wow, that was amazing!

I loved the art style, so much details and texture. You've painted a very lively world. I was very impressed with the numerous tricks you've pulled with subtle scenes and avatar changes and how organically they felt, making the story more detailed and believable. It's using Bytsy to tell stories and explore worlds on a whole new level for me, and I will definitely look to it as an inspiration for my own games. 

Great job, looking forward to play the full version of your game!