The $30/day bonus to her Academic Professor pay might make her a little too strong off the bat, so I understand if you decide against it, but it seems to me like Seve Pasztor would be a perfect fit for the Traditionalist trait. The trait is currently quite underused, being given only to the Patreon-exclusive Stacey and the very lategame Arizona, if I understand correctly, and I think it could use a little more representation.

A small thing that's probably more bother than it's worth, but it'd be a neat detail if the Scrap Heap visibly shrank in the Yard screen as you clear it out - one or two extra graphics of a smaller, tidier heap swapped in as the counter runs down. It would also be nice if the Heap was automatically demolished once you've fully searched it.

We have Head Maid, Butler, etc., that train slaves at something as well as do a job, so perhaps there is a place for a Head Nurse/Doctor, a Pimp/Madame, and/or Custodian/Housekeeper (Head Janitor)?

Acknowledgement of fulfillment of Hopes and Dreams. It would be really immersive to have a slave's fulfillment of their Hopes and Dreams be announced and celebrated through the slave's dialogue --for example,  the slave initiates dialogue with acknowledgement and gratefulness, the MC responds with choices of celebratory, encouragement, noncommittal or oppressive responses with possible tag-along events.

Another small thing, whenever you take an NPC to the Diner, they always refer to the meal as "dinner"... even at 7:30 in the morning. Maybe set a temporary $meal string to either breakfast, lunch, or dinner depending on time?

can we please get a chancel quest button

i got stacey early and the very first artifact location was in Silfren woods

i play Ironman/Grimdark/Invasion and already lost 2 high lvl fighters to the pirates and they respawn so fast

there is no chance i can get there the next 100 days

that said 

great game, keep up the good work

I thought there might be a few skills you could add to the game to make it more fun to let you do more. Its OK if its really hard to work them up. But an example would be... time management skill (shaves time off activities you do. Like level 1 saves you 5% off time used doing something then tack on 1% saved for every x levels). There could be other skills too. Do you intend to add more monsters or magic to this game? You could add fishing for npc slave/helpers as a job; that's 1 skill. I don't yet know if you've added farming skills to the game but I noticed you can buy a ranch later so maybe you already have that(?). 

You could add more merchant quests and merchant storyline to the game also. Like XP or money earned for doing travel contracts and bring items to different shops in various places of the maps. Like kill quests only instead of kills make stuff. And merchant levels and make merchant skills into skills you can acquire also. You could add several merchant skills... 1 for discounts, 1 for upselling or marketing, etc.

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You don't technically have to add this. Your game is already good. But its fun to keep doing things and keep seeing what you'll add. 

A slight discrepancy: Donating captures to Fort Sera directly only increases Power above 100 if the capture is one of a few types of elite fighter, but adding them to your household and then donating them through the Actions tab always increases Power, even if they're a feeble halfwit druggie with no combat skill. Perhaps a similar condition could be added there?

Currently, the RPG Night hangout can only be played through once, and then it's just a greyed-out option for the rest of the game. I'd suggest that it should be made repeatable by unsetting $rpgnight at the end of the campaign, though for balance reasons that'll probably require its yields to be reduced and capped.

Hi GrimDark! First off, I just want to say how much I appreciate the work you’re doing on Masters of Raana. It’s one of the most ambitious Twine/SugarCube projects I’ve ever seen, and the depth of worldbuilding and mechanics really shows the amount of care you put into it.

I wanted to share a few friendly accessibility suggestions, coming from the perspective of players who rely on screen readers (NVDA, JAWS, VoiceOver, etc.). Twine can be very accessible, but some design patterns need small tweaks to work well with assistive tech. None of these are urgent — just things that could help more players enjoy the game smoothly.

Here are some ideas that could make MoR much more screen-reader-friendly:

🌟 Small but high-impact fixes

• Use real <button> elements for choices

Some interactable elements in MoR are spans/anchors styled as buttons. Screen readers don’t recognize them as clickable.

SugarCube already supports <button>, and switching to those makes everything keyboard and SR friendly automatically.

• Add ARIA landmarks

Just wrapping key areas like this helps a lot:

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<main role="main"> for the passage text

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<nav role="navigation"> for menus

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<aside> for the stats panel

This lets screen reader users jump around easily.

• Make sure elements can be tabbed/focused

A lot of games hide focus outlines or use non-focusable elements.

Just allowing normal focus and keeping a visible outline makes navigation smoother.

• Announce new passages

When Twine swaps passages, screen readers don’t automatically know a change happened.

Adding a small aria-live="polite" div that updates with the passage name would fix that nicely.

🌟 Larger QoL improvements

• A simple “Access Mode” toggle

A mode that:

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turns off animations

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disables hover-to-see tooltips

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linearizes the UI

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reveals info that’s normally hidden

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uses only text menus

This would make MoR much easier for blind/low-vision players.

• Text-based map option

The visual map is cool, but a text version like:

North Market — shops, guilds  

Industrial Ring — crafting, machinery  

Old City — nobles, temples  

Underways — criminal, shady work  

would be super helpful.

• Click-to-expand descriptions instead of hover

Perks, traits, items, clothing, and NPCs often use hover boxes.

Replacing these with button-based collapsible sections works great in screen readers.

• Stat changes & dice rolls announced

If stats or dice results also update an aria-live region (“Agility increased to 7”), blind players get immediate feedback just like sighted players.

💛 Final note

Not expecting all or even most of this — MoR is a huge project already, and you’re doing fantastic work. These are just suggestions that could widen the game’s audience and make it more enjoyable for players who rely on assistive tech.

Thanks again for creating such a rich, fascinating world.

If you ever decide to explore accessibility improvements and want feedback/testing, I’d be happy to help