The theme of vietnamese war veterans strikes hard. I am not from the US but know a some vietnamese people that fled the horrors of war. And the way they were treated after fleeing… Well, I won’t risk a very euphemistic way to put it.
The way you link this to capitalism and the american dream is really interesting. You have to offer everything to it, even your own identity. That’s dark, but true.
The visual, even if it is the only one, looks very cool!
On the negative side of things, between the convoluted poetry and the repetitive passages, I had a hard time understanding it all, since English isn’t my native language. Also, maybe it is just me but having to tap the bottom right corner does not feel intuitive for me. I had to read the description to understand what to do.
To summarize : a very strong entry! Well done!






