I love the visuals and the idea for the game. The problem was that I couldn't understand how to play it, mayby if you work a bit more in the usability you would have a great game.
It is a cool concept and the visuals are exelent. My biggest problem is that it isn't tha much fun. Also, it can turn really dificult form one seocnd to the next.
The idea is inetresteing and I love teh art but it lost me with the the font and blocks of text that it drops at the beginig. Still I think it is something worth expanding on.
It does respect the them of being out of control and I did found it fun for a couple of minutes but it is prety much imposible to play for a long period of time.