Congrats DivineN! So happy for you! It's so well deserved!! :)
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Giving up time can be a bit scary! heheh! It's a relatable theme! :)
Thanks so much for all the lovely comments! I tried my best to give all sorts of different ways people could be affected by having time being cut out, resizing limbs and organs in strange ways felt right and creepy to do. But I enjoy a good macabre mood. eheheh
Thanks so much!! I definitely build it in a way that would allow the possibility of a cult or the Crocodilus to just appear out of nowhere in some other random places.
I'll make sure to go around and fix mistakes. English isn't my mother-tongue, so I'll probably need help proof reading properly too! I definitely finished it all in a rush! ahah! Thanks for the head's up! :)
Ohhh and I can see all these mutated vessels as strange half machine / half sea creatures in my head and I'm loving it! The Fleshsinger transforming the vessels delicately is lovely too, whimsical even! There is a whole charm to it all that would suit any underwater adventure! Thanks for sharing it with us!
This felt like a solid pitch to present the idea of the world you started to build. We can tell that a lot of thought has been put into each character, each moment, the timeline of it all, it's so impressive to see that it happened in such a short time too! I love the two brother deamons so soooo much! I could imagine them influencing the world in so many ways!
I'm biased because I adore Mike Mignola and I could feel that influence seep through in great ways here : the bold shadows that make use focus on specific details in the art. The limited color palette, the thick and angular lines. I think that choice was perfect because it totally fits the mood and you've made it your own in a good way. Maybe it's because I'm an illustrator, but I can see how long all this could take. That's massive! Good job!
You are quite the storyteller! This was very fun read and each room has such a unique et clear image to them. I could imagine myself walking through it all. The idea of teleporting into a glass terrarium is so good! I could see this happen again and again in an adventure. Lovely work! So glad you submitted!