Nice story and an interesting idea. Sadly I had to Google who Richey Edwards was to get some context but a good idea non the less.
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Nice art style and story telling. At first I though this was a second entry by @zelan because your title screens are very similar, but the story got a little dark in the middle part, but I guess that's what you where going for
Brilliant job, it was a nice experience to just have dialog between two people, nothing whizzing around on the screen to direct you attention away from the story. Would you consider expanding this?