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I hadn't noticed the comment was old. Of course, everyone has their own taste. I understand you. For me, of all the adult graphic novels I've played (and there aren't many, it's true), this is undoubtedly the best. But nothing is ever perfect. There's always something we think could be better. Best regards.

GEARIAH I agree that the more realistic the story, the better the experience and immersion. I disagree with the other person (TUTORIALBIT) who said it has to be abnormal to be interesting. However, there's no problem with some things being implausible or improbable from time to time, as long as they aren't too absurd. There's a limit to how much of a lie there is that doesn't disrupt the atmosphere and that we understand as a license for the plot to work more practically.

Of everything that happens in the game so far, only the initial interview with Stevens really disrupts the experience (his attitude and Emma's), I also think there are some exaggerated intrigues, but otherwise, the game is almost flawless in my opinion. Certainly the best graphic novel I've ever played. I agree that that situation would fit better after Emma was already employed, similar to what happens between her and Victor (vice president).

Regarding bisexual and homosexual choices, I wouldn't mind (even though I'm heterosexual), but it's important to understand that it would require a huge effort to develop another massive branch of events (because it would completely change the story) to cater to only a small segment of the audience. It's much more advantageous to invest in strengthening the heterosexual storyline, which has much higher demand and yields greater returns, than to reduce the main storyline to add content for a small segment. It's easier for non-binary people (or those who enjoy lesbian scenes) to seek out games focused on those theme (there are many) than to expect small developers to invest in games for all audiences (because it's much more work).

The main story of the game (Emma) is very good and quite believable, very well constructed, very well paced. The dialogues, the script, the way Emma discovers herself and frees herself from modesty. The game is very immersive and is perhaps the first erotic graphic novel that made me want to read all the dialogues.

That said, I took the liberty of giving you some SUGGESTIONS that can make the game even better in future updates (THERE ARE SOME SPOILERS):

1) Liliana's innocence is very unrealistic and somewhat spoils the immersion that the game brings with all the other well-set situations. I don't know how old she is, but I assume she's at least 18. What I think would be an incredible plot twist is discovering later in her story with Tyler that she was actually pretending to be innocent to seduce him or to gain some professional advantage.

2) Dude, if you think it's worth to do, change the ending of the night in Paris. When the vice president (Victor) removes the 4n4l plug, give him the option to choose 4n4l (surprising Emma and leading her to an intense 0rg4sm). I say this because the scene was perfectly orchestrated for that to happen (and Emma would find herself in intense conflict upon realizing that the best night of s3x of her life – up to that point – happened with a man she hates). And that would be the turning point for Emma to start becoming more d4ring and pr0miscu0us.

3) I don't know if it's planned, but at some point in the game, it would be incredible if Emma had the option to choose to have s3x with 2 men (without her husband present, and preferably one of the guys being Nathan - the club owner) and try DP. As well as a f0urs0m3 scene with her neighbor friends Shelly and Justin.

4) Refine Tyler's personality because he's very inconsistent at times; one minute he's jealous and controlling, and the next he bows down to Emma. Bring more depth to his personality, show the conflict in dealing with Emma's changing lib1do and his hypocrisy in getting involved with other women.

5) Make the women have less similar bodies, one with relatively small (but still s3xy) br3asts, with different n1ppl3 shapes, another with more rounded bodies, a hot chubby girl, a redhead, etc.

6) Personally, I didn't like the intrigues between the female coworkers, I found them too exaggerated. The only one I think is worth developing more is Amelia (Emma's boss). If it's possible to make a change... bro, it would be epic if Victor (vice president) told Amelia to leave after the bl0wj0b with Emma still in the room. Amelia getting up, wiping her mouth and awkwardly fixing her clothes and walking past Emma with her head down in shame. And the boss remains with his d1ck out as if nothing is wrong, even with Emma right in front of him.

7) Finally, I hope Emma's friend, (Maggie - who she talks to on the phone) visits her at some point, maybe when Emma is working at the bar. And that they both find two guys they'll have s3x with and swap p4rtners with (maybe the DP scene happens here).

Best regards!

So you should to make that clear in the game so we don't waste time repeating actions that serve no purpose. A message indicating that it's not possible to advance beyond that level until the next update would be enough. It took me a while to notice the problem, and then I wasted even more time trying to figure out what could be causing that; I uninstalled and reinstalled the game, searched for previous versions, restored old saves to find out when the problem started and tried to repeat the gameplay from there... This situation is quite unpleasant.

There's a bug in the game; my 'exhibitionism' level is stuck at 19, and no matter how many times I choose actions that give me +1, the stat remains stuck at 19.

Same is happening to corruption.

How to get the subscriber code?

Light_23, sugestão: experimenta usar o Xpadder. É simples de usar e resolve isso rapidinho. abç

Ajuda, mas muito pouco. Ainda mais que a composição de inimigos varia consideravelmente a cada jogada. Já encarei uma longuíssima sequência de humanos (estáticos, todos um atrás do outro, onde fui obrigado a matar alguns pra que o jogo saísse daquilo) e outras com muitos zumbis vindo de posições diferentes. Muitas vezes é impossível eliminar todos, mesmo com o rapidfire. No meu entender, é preciso reduzir a quantidade de tiros que cada tipo de inimigo precisa pra morrer. 3 tiros nos zumbis mais fracos (esqueci os nomes de cada um, acho que são os "corredores") é muita coisa, principalmente por eles serem os mais volumosos e mais velozes do seu jogo.

Mas enfim, é minha opinião. De repente oferecer níveis de dificuldade. Mas tipo, a ideia é boa, o jogo é promissor, os gráficos estão bonitos, mas pra mim, não tem essa de "desafiador", tenho família, trabalho, tarefas... quando vou jogar, tem que ser pra me divertir. Já basta dos estresses da vida! rs

É diferente pra quem é adolescente e tem tempo e muita disposição pra longas jornadas de jogatina que não avança. Não tem que ser fácil e banal, só não pode o jogo ter somente o modo 'Punitivo' como opção. rsrs E eu não sou noob, jogo vídeo game desde os anos 80, já zerei centenas de jogos, de diversas plataformas e diferentes gerações. Só que pra minha realidade hoje, Game é pela experiêcia, se ela não flui e me cansa, eu desisto.
Abç.

Ficou legal, porém difícil demais.

Entendo que há vários perfis de jogadores, mas pra mim, jogo tem que ser pra divertir e curtir a experiência. Se o jogo é difícil demais e você precisa ficar repetindo e repetindo pra conseguir avançar, então deixa de ser divertido e começa a ficar estressante. Vira um exercício pros dedos atirar e atirar e atirar e atirar (e trocar de arma de vez em quando). É como se estivéssemos jogando Megamania do Atari, só que começando já na fase mais rápida que é feita pro jogador morrer mesmo e o estímulo passa a ser apenas acumular um pouco mais de ponto e descobrir quantas fases mais vc consegue avançar antes das suas vidas acabarem.

Enfim, o jogo te estressa logo nos primeiros segundos e depois de 3 a 5 tentativas, constata-se que é aquilo mesmo e aí vc desiste.
Sugiro reduzir o n° de tiros que os inimigos têm que levar pra morrerem. começando com 1 e aumentando de 1 em 1 pra cada hierarquia dos inimigos. Dessa forma, usaríamos as outras armas só quando estivermos cercados ou contra os inimigos mais fortes.

abç

Muito legal, mas acho que faltou ter opção de pausar o jogo.

Download link (Google Drive) is broken

The game is cool, but the most current release is too expensive for an independent game that, supposedly, isn't even complete yet.

Hope you finish the game and make it available on Steam, but I suggest you to reduce the minimum value, I believe you would sell much more this way.

Nice game. Consider making it available on Steam if you intend to make it into a full game. Best regards!

What are the commands and shortcuts? I don't even know if there is an options menu. I don't even know if there is a way to exit the game without manually closing the window. The camera doesn't reposition itself when you lean against walls, preventing you from seeing anything in front of you.

If you're playing this game for the first time, you have to keep pressing the mouse right button in order to shoot (instead of clicking for each shoot).

Nice idea, but it requires small adjustments on game mechanics. Such like adding dodge option and a movement to get rid of when grabbed by zombies.

It's a good game and deserves be finished. Really nice.

Nice game.

I will not ask for refund. Take the money as a support to keep you developing cool games. I only ask you to let me know if you find this game. Will send an email to help you find me if that happens. Best regards. glauco.valente@gmail.com

Don't you have the game to reupload and send me a link?

No worries, bro. Nice work anyway. I feel much better now that I'm sure I finish it properly. :D

Paid for the game but the shared Google Drive folder is empty. UPDATING: the developer reuploaded the game and it's ready now. ;)

Awesome! Hope you finish it.

Is there a way to escape? As the game returns "missing" when the ambulance runs over you, it implies that there is a way to win, otherwise it is expected that the message would be "the end". Could you please share with us whether it's possible or not to defeat the pig face? Thanks!

Hope you can finish the game. It's really good.