there is a typo when she is doing chores on the farm "She spends the whole afternoon doing various odjobs around the farm" odjobs should be odd jobs. When talking to the captain in the hometown he says "U will have to look for yourself Ms. Neel. I believe you to be a young, capable woman who can search for her sister without needing our help." U should be you. When talking to the church with Julia "Do you know anything about Kira that might help us find her? Anything unusal about her when she stayed here or when she left? unusal should be unusual. When Zara directs you to talk to Oliva "And when you prove yourself capable then we can discuss the Lord's path propper" propper should be proper. "Emily's though" should be Emily's thoughts. When Emily is dream masturbating "To be swept away by the rivers of exctasy and pure bliss." exctasy should be ecstasy. also during that "I need to pull myslef together." myslef should be myself. "just sleep, no immoral thoughs. thoughs should be thoughts. "Emily falls asleep managing to supress her feelings" supress should be suppressing.
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The artwork is nice. not a big fan of tilted moving text or of the unity engine but it seemed like an interesting story. The writing is a bit long winded since this is a visual novel it's better to show instead of describe something like hallways and such if I was to return to this later I would hope for some choice since some of the girls I felt I should go easy on and others I could understanding getting "revenge" or some such nonsense but it does say in the description that it's linear story so I might be expecting too much. I would also like a bit more world lore such as why does Rosalind want to study at this academy, what's to prevent her from just taking what she knows and becoming an hedge witch. How much control does the church actually have over the academy could they lead a witch hunt with enough evidence. Just my thoughts I hope you are able to take this project where you want it
not saying Stevens is a dumb idea but really you have to admit it's kind of dumb how it's set up. I could understand it better if he was a dominating personality when he does the interview and get sexual later when he knows he can get away with it from what I remember this doesn't have much comedy and was more of a drama
I like your sprite work it's very pretty and almost realistic but I'm not a fan of the story so far. Tyler is an ass and there isn't enough backstory for me to feel any good about him. Justin is okay from what I saw. The porn fantasy logic is at play with Stevens since no matter how big or successful his company is that's not how to approach an interview best case you get shitty employees worse case you get sued or the board/HR finds out and you lose your job granted he could use his credentials to find a similar job but that's why you don't sexually harass strangers off the street. What got me to try this was to see if Emma could turn bi or lesbian and the trick choices aren't a good thing, masturbate to take off the edge nope higher arousal than you started, do all the unpacking and sorting for douche to be an ass. make coffee for the knob and he doesn't even drink it.
I like this novel. it has the right tone, cute moments and had me laughing a lot. I'm still debating which is better officially starting a relationship with Doriana or keeping it vague. Only thing that I question my decision on is Sam doesn't know her enough to take the bullet for her in the Christmas party, but I do like how they get closer without putting a label on it. The porn was kind of disorientating, and it bothers me there are choices that aren't really choices. I liked the Tarzan/Rapunzel/Jesus look.
play the game before you question it. it has dominance and submissive as a relation stat so femdom is likely to be in it. the fact that it has multiple relationships going at the same time means that harem is a possibiltity and sketchyshit just likes to fish for ntr to shame. this has been out for about 11 hours and from the looks of it it's more of a interesting story instead of just smut
interesting story, I have to admit I spent an entire day off trying to understand what the heck was going on in this. I felt the fight scenes were too chaotic and the start was confusing since there was no real connection to the characters yet. I think Miriam was too long winded at points and when philosophy is used it's very open to interpretation and I have to admit even after getting all the cgs I'm still confused about certain things in this story. the major flaw I see in this is that it's not very concise and I feel all the endings are kind of sad in a way.
I really enjoyed this. At first I felt it was a little to light but as you got to the meetings it felt about right for depth to the point your surprised that it's only been less than a month in game. the characters bounce off each other pretty well and this game made me realize I really do have a fetish for petplay since my favorite characters were Akatsuki>Lucy>Victoria and lastly Sarah. I kept getting Hannah and Catherine confused in my head and Rachel is very annoying. I know Mika was vetoed but I actually like her better since she doesn't get at much screen time as Rachel so it feels like she is just dumb for falling into a love triangle. I hope in future updates Annabelle becames a main character since I found her cute. Only flaw I found playing up to day 26 is I'm not really into the spanking which is kinda a core kink in this game but it's a good novel
This novel is alright. The premise is good on paper but actually going through it is very jarring with oh wipe everyone memories or rewind so I'm stuck wondering what is actually cannon. I only found two of the girls attractive Amy and Melanie but you really don't get an option to just focus on some girls instead it's all of them and the choices you have is, be bluntly lewd or what feels like just lewd.
Finally got around to playing the new update before the end of my days off. Still like the game overall but I noticed the only position service exp goes up is masturbation despite there being other options in that category. Also, I'm curious if there is love points with the other girls since this update lets us see Valarie's points because I usually side with Rena since it seems she is on the defensive in their arguments but if the only thing that is tracked is how much Valarie loves you. My only complaint is you take so long to update it's like watching a cake bake seems like it takes forever but it's great when it's done. I saw casual desires is going up in steam so I'm looking forward getting into that again.
yes, I did like it for the most part. yes, I want to see more updates and yes it did stand out a little since I played it. I would have to admit I was debating what Kaitlyn was since it's my understanding that psychopaths lack emotion for about an hour. I settled on either psychosocial or autism but I'm not a psychologist so it's hard to figure out what a fictional character is for me. I did enjoy the quirky humor and I really do wonder if what was written for Tom's tutoring was true or not never really thought of jellyfish that deep.
interesting game, few typos with the scene with Amalia the line with "She could be on a beach holiday in Ibiza right now, not washing the clothes of a tomboy like me. But she chose my father, so maybe that is love." tomboy is a word for a girl so unless the mc is secretly a girl who is really good at acting like a boy it should just be boy. Another one with Liam is after the questions "MutuallyLiam, thanks for answering the questions" need a space after mutually. there is another one that I can't remember exactly where it is where Halit is spelled with a c. the game has a bit too many "mini-games" football for Americans is different from the rest of the world and throwing in mini games when it's going to end the same way is kind of waste of time. I'm not a big fan of Patricia and even intentionally picked things that I thought would make her not like me only to be force to screwing her was kind of annoying. Overall, I did enjoy the game although I do feel it's kind of drifting from one point to the other.
sorry to hear that the end of the year blues is getting to you. I have to say it, but the game's artwork could use some improvement, and it could use some faster updates since even for someone who browses the itch.io adult section nearly daily the game gets buried under a lot of other games. I'll admit the reason I supported you so far on boosty is because of Magni but game development is rough. I seen and played many games and a lot of them do hit hurls. While the concept of is interesting sometimes it's just luck on what hits big and all we can do is hope things improve the IRL as you put it
This isn't a bad first start. I didn't like how the skip was disabled, there was too much lore vomiting, too much altered text such as shaking or glitching it and it seems to me that the environment is too bright and pristine. I can tell you are having fun with the game and some of the jokes did get me to chuckle. I kind of like the cast minus Athena. it baffles me why the main character didn't know about Anubis, I really thought he was isekai until Lara came into the picture. The commander of the main character is just someone who would get fragged also everyone uses flintlocks which were horribly inaccurate and pretty much became and antiques around the 19th century also had an effective range of about ten yards despite the main character throwing a revolver around when he crashes, also shouldn't his forces be trying to find him governments likes to keep track of their expensive toys but personal are considered an important assets as well. My two cents on top of what dgoulet was complaining about is when it comes to porn people are very picky about the weirdest things when it comes to porn such as ntr, lesbianism and in one case I saw someone seething about lack of anal in one game. one way to deal with that is make everything skippable or like many others have done and make a fetish list. I'll keep an eye on this since I am curious if Mica shows back up, I want to see how the story continues with Lara and I'm also wondering if the main character is going to do the stupid thing most harem games do and delay letting his love interests know about each other far too long.
I liked this game despite not really being appealed by the description. seemed like another noir game and it really baffled me about being in unity instead of renpy but by the time I got use to it and it was getting interesting it stops. I was wondering if this project is put on hold for dogma, if this is considered finished or if you are doing both at the same time.
Spent about a week playing legacy and got to the point of Sora scene and felt like that was the last straw came back to read the comments here and found out I was playing legacy. I gave the remake a try and was stuck wondering at different points who are you and are you going to die because I don't remember you. Overall, I liked the new look for all the characters, and I can tell you used your experience in writing to do a better story although legacy had a little charm. The thing that was rubbing me the wrong way with it was forced relationships and choices not effecting much at least at the point I decide I didn't like it. I'm not sure how much the remake will follow along the legacy but a lot of times it was say something or not and get the same result (like with Rosalyn chest scene. nothing wrong with it just no difference with what choice you make), maybe I don't feel like screwing a zombie but want to screw a vampire, while light and dark was hinted at it would change the story it didn't at the point I got to and the points those decisions appeared it was, be an asshole for the sake of being an asshole. I didn't like Fuyumi because how aggressive she was but like Sora but nope story demands I screw both of them without a choice to do none. I like the game for the most part it had humorous parts and while it was a shotgun of tastes for characters, they were distinct enough to be likable.
it was interesting, found a few typos with Melfa mc said "Not every woman, tough. Just the gorgeous ones." tough means durable while though means however. Melfa also said "He was killed by monsters while trying to protect that bitchs." either that needs to be changed to those if there is more than one and bitchs needs to be changed to bitches or bitchs needs to be changed to bitch if it is just one. I can tell you are still learning the engine but I liked the game overall.
thank you for the reply, honestly this reminds me of a manga I think I torrented many years ago can't remember the title. I liked it up until the point where a character lost all hopes of being normal. My taste is varied but permanent lost of freedom is a line I don't like crossing. Which is why I'm curious if as the protagonist if we will be fighting for or against the love dolls. I'll keep an eye on this and see how it goes
I think I played this awhile back and was turned off at the beginning because how the Rita was introducing herself since she was basically monologuing, I'm hot and rich. Glad your other game Rebel Duet got me interested in trying this one again. As fun as it was playing a lesbian slut I was wondering at what point will it be too much. Evelyn and Mia kind of just disappeared and Rita getting mad for the delivery person not being interested was a downer, but I did like the main cast enough to want to play more.
While the majority of games I play now are porn there is a lot of tags on itch.io to match what suits the game. The porn rabbit hole can go deep and rarely will it satisfy everyone. I feel that you should focus on your strong suits before branching out into other things. Project 0193 has a decent story and background but I already can see it branching out way out like in cyoa. just the pacificist and non pacificist run has already made it so you have to make two games essentially. Once you feel you developed this game well enough maybe start a second one to go the more nsfw way.
I like the characters in the game. I really didn't like Octavia and liked Riley at first, but the rest of the demo convinced me to buy the game. spent the day playing this and I came around to Octavia the more I learnt about her and found Riley annoying during the second half, but I think that's more because I was feeling for my character injecting reality into fantasy his dick would be sore bouncing between so many women. hardest choice in the game was who to sit next to in history class which for me Chloe won. The fetish list threw me off at first since I thought it was enabling content to be shown instead of a checklist. All the characters look attractive, I was disappointed there wasn't more to Liu. You did well on character development, but it feels like the main plot moves so slow and I like how you tried to cater to a lot of tastes. I think you handled trans pretty well without being overbearing. I just found that the beginning was restrictive balancing points which I glad you move away from later in the story and was more based on choices. I did give this story a five-star rating, but my biggest disappointment was the end of the content. I really wanted to see how the main character fucking every woman would go but I'll have to put it on my pile of games to checkback on down the road for development time.
that part was annoying but what I did was save before the room and run around writing down the answers from each computer. it wasn't until it was solved I figured out how to lock it in the center. the fight isn't hard just tedious and if you run to the other side after you down it it takes longer for it to get to you.
it's alright. I feel like there could of been more like ways to change how they look and some upgrades were counter productive such as max out rest time so they didn't need to use break time and if they they didn't rest then drip didn't work. considering you had time constraints it's understandable. if you do decide to continue working on this game I would like to see more story and it would of been nice to see what upgrades that were cut. I don't understand the idea of a leaderboard since there is no fail state.
not a bad start, I don't know how long you were working on this but I came looking for porn and was surprised to find a discount cyberpunk. :p The game looks well made but found a typo with purple hair guy in the sewers, instead of quit he says quite. Paying for bullets is a bit too micromanaging a bullet cost two dollars a rat pays one dollar and you are not really rolling in money for most of the game and even the guns you do find I knew I would burn through nine bullets or seventeen bullets in no time. I also feel Berry needs to learn ddos attack a level or two earlier since a black hat is pretty pointless until you can use it to attack machines and the definition of what counts is kind of a mystery since cyborg dog is not but mesh cyborg dog is. mp and tp are not really balanced I know it would suck if Len or Stella was out of mp but why use mp if the most expensive skill costs fifty-five, but you regen thirteen percent every turn, get over a little four hundred mp and you gain more than you lose. Meanwhile Berry can freely do double and triple attack to gain twelve to fifteen tp only to burn it doing something like bash or slash which does the same amount of damage just for a chance of a status effect, but Len needs ten tp to hurt not machines since black hats have horrible attack. The story is interesting enough but I can't really judge on it since it hasn't finished yet.
I feel I enjoyed this game although half the game models are fugly, and I feel like there was a lack of direction in the game since there was loose ends all over the place. I can tell you are learning since the schools of magic were not something to collect and in act 2 it was more all of them level up at the same time. Also I felt like Bredita and necromancy being evil was kinda overshadowed with how fast the power scaling went. I can't tell if it was guilt from the start or just overeagerness to share the sex scenes but it was kind of overwhelming at the end especially since it was kind of repeating of actions just with different girls for most of it. I gave this game a three star rating since it was pretty much baseline for a good game but I would be interested in any new projects you decided to share but I would suggest have a storyboard or an outline of what to do for the project beforehand also I know authors like to foreshadow things but showing us cutscenes of things our character doesn't know only to inform the player character later was kinda a long-winded form of writing.
I agree with aleciarobbins you sort of need to work on a description of what the game is about. I can tell you are still learning the engine because there is a problem with the text running off and some places have the wrong triggers such as in the beginning with the paper cup it will pick up me interacting with it even if I'm actually by the armors, the hidden doors are also something that should be avoided, although it makes sense now a days to have a house front door across from the other if the player can't see a door then it's possible they won't find the door also a lot of clipping assets. Overall, it was alright for a lighthearted adventure
This isn't a bad start, the major flaw I see is you need to proofread your work a lot. in visual novels the thing that players will interact with the most is the writing, so you need to double and triple check to make sure it's done well so maybe run it through a word doc before putting it in. I noticed some place where there needed to be a space and when first meets the twins, Saeko will refer to the main character as Jay even if you change his name. I suggest in future projects try to keep the cast a bit more down since it's hard to keep track of who is who when you have ten people introduced in a short time. I'll check out Dreams of Desire and Deadmoon but when it comes to visual novels the ones that stick in my head is Tales from the Unending Void by preverteer and Ravager by 4minutewarning.
I enjoyed this game a lot. I just hope in later updates there is more influence and time. it's kind of annoying how get changed into a female, handicaps you so much with Gethra not giving you the time of day in the first challenge and Marazet waiting for you on the second one. I kind of hope in the more developed version you can screw over more of the characters because it feels like a lot of them needs to be took down a peg or two. Also some of the characters I feel don't need to be changed much if at all such as Rhianna. I would also suggest making the hubs more distinguished because I didn't notice quick enough you can meet people outside of your faction's icon and the gazebo.
tried the demo and I can agree somewhat with what Raven commented on about 9 months ago and I find the main character annoying. not sure how Raven felt about it but I found him kind of stupid for the first chapter. chaos of getting captured okay being imprisoned in a different country yet can still find it in himself to bitch and complain like he doesn't really understand his situation. also felt annoyed at how easy it was to force him into things where I think I would get shocked was refusing to do sexual things since he has a history of it but nope and would be kind of common sense in a country ran by the other gender you shouldn't yell at your partner like a dumbass. I really wish he didn't hide the fact he was forced to do sexual things from his wife. regardless I'm interested enough to buy this game is it better to buy it on itch.io or steam?