The artwork is nice. not a big fan of tilted moving text or of the unity engine but it seemed like an interesting story. The writing is a bit long winded since this is a visual novel it's better to show instead of describe something like hallways and such if I was to return to this later I would hope for some choice since some of the girls I felt I should go easy on and others I could understanding getting "revenge" or some such nonsense but it does say in the description that it's linear story so I might be expecting too much. I would also like a bit more world lore such as why does Rosalind want to study at this academy, what's to prevent her from just taking what she knows and becoming an hedge witch. How much control does the church actually have over the academy could they lead a witch hunt with enough evidence. Just my thoughts I hope you are able to take this project where you want it
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Thank you so much for your feedback! 💙 It’s really helpful to hear your honest thoughts—especially about the descriptions, choices, and lore. 🎭 I’ll definitely keep this in mind for future projects (there will be more, and I’m working on improvements! ✨). So glad the story resonated with you despite its flaws. 🥰 Your support means the world and keeps me motivated! 🚀🔥