interesting story, I have to admit I spent an entire day off trying to understand what the heck was going on in this. I felt the fight scenes were too chaotic and the start was confusing since there was no real connection to the characters yet. I think Miriam was too long winded at points and when philosophy is used it's very open to interpretation and I have to admit even after getting all the cgs I'm still confused about certain things in this story. the major flaw I see in this is that it's not very concise and I feel all the endings are kind of sad in a way.