This was nice in its own way. I want to say I can feel the passion for this project. You have to be careful with voice actors because I have seen at least two games fail because the dev couldn't find reliable voice actresses. The other criticism I have is the body proportions are way off. women naturally have measurements close together grant it's unrealistic but an hourglass body which some were able to achieve with help of corsets was 36 bust 24 waist and 36 hips the average for American women according to google is a waist of 38 and a bust of 36c which has gone up from 34b so while some can have large breasts but they would have wider hips. it's one of the ways you can surmise that a woman had breasts enlargement surgery, I'm not sure what your criteria for the harem route will be since other novels have a rough time adjusting for all the possibilities. not really a fan of Billie (from what I seen seems to lean towards femdom which not something I'm interested in) and men although I do like the inclusivity for people who are. On day three I felt the mc was a bit demanding for what he needs from someone who he just met two days ago from an organization he knows nearly nothing about but I can understand his feelings on a bookshelf. I think you need to add a little idle time to wind down. While it's fun to shotgun blast content when you can, spreading it out more so there is more downtime helps with a better story since it gives the player more time to process things. Dude just started school and has exams and homework that he has no time to work on since something comes up. Bodhi seems like he gets no sleep with how he is everywhere but the mc is also always active and unable to reflect.