This is really cool! I liked the character and the interactions were great. It was fun going for different endings and seeing everything :3
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This was really cool!! The premise is amazing, it has so much tension built into it already. (Reminds me of Of The Devil!). Lynn's wolf design is incredible, and Marie's backstory was very compelling. And the scene where they were in bed together was so sweet.
There were a few typos in the scene with Marie and Lynn in the red string room: I caught "this board coers every wolf case" "so far her ntoes seem to match" "roughh exterior".
Thank you so much for the kind words and comprehensive feedback!! It means so much to me that people have been enjoying this game, and I think you make a lot of keen points. Ms. Mary Sue, the teacher, was a relatively late addition I made to make the story's ethos more consistent, so your notes it being confusing in the text scrawl is especially helpful. I've worked on a lot of games before but not so much writing stories so I tried hard to get it right.
















































