Thank you so much for the kind words and comprehensive feedback!! It means so much to me that people have been enjoying this game, and I think you make a lot of keen points. Ms. Mary Sue, the teacher, was a relatively late addition I made to make the story's ethos more consistent, so your notes it being confusing in the text scrawl is especially helpful. I've worked on a lot of games before but not so much writing stories so I tried hard to get it right.