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Amazing start to a VN! Loved seeing the dynamic between Cody and his friends prior to his move. The only thing I'm not sold on so far is the immediate rekindling of the friendship between Aldric and Cody. Seems too good to be true. Also hope there are more love interests.

You don't have to be a professional to be able to tell what is bad writing... 

"this was weeks ago, please go away." This applies to you more than it does to me. Replying to a 2+ month old comment with a go-away. It appears my comment about 5-year-old me trying to come up with an argument still stands. 

I don't follow this game but I decided to click on this page cause it's been a while since its demo release and I see this argument.

I'm just going to have to point you toward the fact that editors and proofreaders exist and they are considered PROFESSIONALS when reading and judging if something is "good". They know what makes for good writing but lack the ability to create for themselves. Especially so since they are CONSUMERS just like all of us.

 Your comment does not make any rational or logical sense. Oh, you don't like this thing? You go make something better and let us all judge. That's like 5-year-old me trying to come up with an argument about something.

Have a few things to say regarding this post. 

You sound fairly young, work on yourself before you work on projects like this which should come from a place of love rather than "hate". I am sure you started this project and loved at least a part of what you put out. Work on getting back to that.

I don't follow you on social media or anything but you are clearly not well mentally. Take the time to get professional help. It's ok to get help and you are not alone in it. Consider getting off of social media since it's very evidently affecting you in some way. Also, fuck society, you are you. Humans are social creatures but that doesn't mean society as a whole dictates how a person should live.

It's understandable that there are too many things to fix in a project like this. Take this as a learning experience so you can streamline your project building for next time.

And for what it's worth, I did actually enjoy this project. Thought it had potential even if it did get very strange at times. Hope you're in a better place the next time you post something here.

I'm getting the same error when downloading. First time this has happened.

I wouldn't mind seeing a chunky Zangoose! Can't go wrong with a Snorlax either. Ursaring/Ursaluna are both staples too. Pangoro can be cute. Urshifu could be interesting too. I clearly have a type. :)

Voices are a nice touch, my only problem is that some of the voices felt jarring to hear like they didn't belong to the character that was speaking.  I know voices don't always match the person and it is subject to opinion so this is hard to fix. I do think the less full lines route would be a good option. 

That was already an option in the first build.

This comment just made my night. Was mildly bummed out that Dave wasn't a love interest when I played through the demo but now I'm just super happy. Keep up the good work!

Good luck with everything going forward! I've always thought this VN had a lot of promise so you taking the time to trim the excess sounds like a good thing. 

It sucks that you didn't enjoy working on this project but I think that's something that will always happen if things aren't panning out the way you wanted it to. Take your time and rewrite this in a way that YOU are satisfied. I understand that as a creator, the audience is important but your first priority should be to be satisfied with your creation. We will be waiting for your return!

Amazing start! Loving the diversity in the cast and sheesh the MC is cute. Really looking forward to seeing how this project goes! Good luck and keep having fun with it!

Hahaha well that's pretty good timing on my part! Looking forward to giving it a go!

First time seeing this VN, looks interesting but where's the download button?

I think you removed the download links by accident some time ago.  

First off before I even touch the game, I would just like to point out that just because you're drawing only wolf anthro's does not mean they should all use the same style of art. I understand this might be hard to implement for newer artists but from an outside perspective, you could tell me that the 4 characters you show on this page are brothers and I would believe you. That's how similar they look. Simply changing height and fur patterns is not enough to differentiate characters. Try to change your art style a tad bit too for each character.

I apologize for nitpicking here but there's waaaay too many similarities between the 4 characters art design atm. They have the same eyes, ears, shoulders, arms, body, and chest hair. In VNs, art is extremely important. Spend some time adding uniqueness to your characters art designs. 

Also props on you for making a game. It's hard but at the end of the day, I hope you enjoy it. It's an experience alright. 

Any plans on translating this VN?

Good start to a VN! Looking forward to seeing more.

Overall I think this VN has potential. Only real problem I see so far is the English. While the English is easy to interpret, the wording is very strange and needs work. Looking forward to what you can do with this VN!

Yes this is Braford's House of Beef. Wolfstar is the programmer of the project while Braford is in charge of art.

Found this game a while back and have played it and even supported Braford on patreon for a bit. The story and dialogue is incredibly corny but in the good and amusing way. Artwork on the other hand is excellent. Updates are short but so worth it due to the amount of attention given towards art updates. This is not a game that recycles sprites and cgs, pretty much every update has new  top-notch sprite animations and cgs involved and it's pretty great.

I agree with this. It's a great start to a VN with a few minor things that I would like to see changed. Diego's interestingly long neck being one, short screen time of characters being second, and some slight grammatical errors being the third. On and off note though, I do quite like the character designs. Good luck with this project and have fun with it. 

I have to say... This really was a complete overhaul. Very well done! Almost teared up at the prologue again and I'm honestly quite enjoying the day by day gameplay! Very curious how some of the choices effect you in the long term.

I don't quite understand why three of the tags are on here but ok lol.

Mildly off topic, but I am actually very glad you guys are coming to the audience for suggestions and showcasing the progress you've made towards implementing them. It's very impressive that we get to see all of this get pumped out so quickly too! Already gearing up to me one of my top 5 VNs and we're barely past the first day! Can't wait to see what else you guys have in store for us!

This one is probably going to require a lot of work, but maybe add one or two more sizes for Asterion? At the moment we have athletic and bulky/muscular (both of which look amazing), but as we all know, everyone has different tastes. In order to better address those taste issues, I was thinking add a slim and chunky/fat option as well considering there is a fairly large audience for both.

As for minor customization's, any piercing would be interesting, heck even adding a tattoo option would be nice. An option to control how hairy/fluffy he is would be interesting too although I imagine that would be troublesome.

Good start, the English isn't perfect but is still understandable. Some very interesting character designs so far with a seemingly big world to explore. Personally think this VN has quite a bit of potential.

Orlando's route currently ends in the middle of day 6 in the version you have. In order to get the rest of day 6 and 7, you would have the be playing the patreon exclusive version which will be released for the public next month on the 15th.

Are you still having trouble finding the other "hints"? It should be fairly obvious once you figure out one.

One of the most thought out VNs I have seen in a while. 10/10 purely for the amount of potential this VN has.

Art is adorable without every character being overly sexualized like they are in so many VNs nowadays. Characters are all equally fleshed out, each with their own distinctive quirks and personalities. Writing is great and while it does seem to contain certain tropes, it is in no way cliche.

If you haven't given this VN a try, I hope you do. It is incredible for something so early in the works.

Great start so far, the only thing I have to suggest really is to change the font to something that's more legible. The fancy script is nice for a bit but after a while it's more annoying then pleasing to the eyes.

I've followed these instructions completely but I do not see him. Possible bug?

Edit: Well by day I'm guessing you mean early morning?? He wasn't there at 10/11AM but he was there at 7AM the next day.

Take your time with it! Although us fans are dying for a new release, it's not worth it if you, the creator, isn't satisfied with your creation! Instead of rushing out update after update, push out something that you can be proud of.