Had been in love with the cover ever since it had been uploaded, and the rest of the interior lives up to that too.
- Twists the original prompt to become more of a jailbreak, something that feels like it would feel right at home as part of 'The Cabin in the Woods'.
- Really like Wendy, both in her abilities and her ulterior motives! Lots of fun roleplaying to be had here, and her secret motivation makes her more than just an annoying escort mission. All of the other cryptids are great too, with fun abilities and enough room in their background for a referee to riff on them.
- The layout on the Fractal Vast pages is great. Love the way that the different zones are set out, and it's clearly explained how to move between each one. Would maybe have liked a bigger random table so that new zones could be randomly generated, as a way of making the Vast feel more maze-like, but the evocative descriptions of each room do a lot of the heavy lifting!
Could easily see this being blown out into something more than double its current length, but this straightforward jailbreak has a surprising amount of depth in it already.




