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This is beautiful, well orchestrated and clearly well thought out! I would have liked to hear a bit more of the tragic side of the artwork, and harmonically things got a bit predictable, but neither of those points distract from what is a really solid submission.

Loved the ominous moments in this, especially the ending. The middle section didn't work for me in the context of the rest of the piece, though I did enjoy it as its own separate thing. Definitely a very creative piece!

Loved the ominous moments in this, especially the ending. The middle section didn't work for me in the context of the rest of the piece, though I did enjoy it as its own separate thing. Definitely a very creative piece!

This is lovely, follows the story really well! I felt it wandered a little bit towards the end, and perhaps could have concluded with the more tragic stuff. Harmonically quite adventurous, and I mean that in a good way!  A little tip if I may: make sure your midi notes overlap each other a little bit, particularly on the melody lines, as that will trigger the legato programming in the samples and add to the realism of the performance. 

This fit the artwork nicely, very much had old-school RPG vibes to it! As others have said, the bells at the start are a bit too loud, but I liked the transition to the more sinister sound at the end. 

I really liked this! It wouldn't sound out of place in a medieval grand strategy game or the like. Maybe a little more development towards the tragic side would have fitted the artwork even better, and I'd love to hear this mocked up in a DAW as that would really take it to the next level!

A top entry, really great stuff! Fits the artwork well and develops in a really satisfying way. One small suggestion would be to shape those melodies even more (my advice is if you've think you've done a bit too much on that, then that's the right amount), but other than that this is a great piece!

This fitted the artwork really well, loved the anticipation and build up. A bit more work at the mixing stage to ensure that the balance between the instruments is more even and this would really shine!

Nice work! The production is generally good and the thematic material is well developed. I felt I wanted to hear more tragic elements to reflect the artwork though, and more harmonic development would have been good. I liked the choice of instrumentation, though the guitar sat too far on the right for the most part. Generally a lovely piece!

Lovely stuff! The production quality on this one is top notch. You conveyed the general overall vibe of the artwork, but I was left wanting more. Perhaps something that moved towards the more tragic elements?

This certainly goes on quite the journey! I feel like the different sections could have more in common with each other as it tended to wander at times. The Heroic ending was cool, and a very different take on the artwork.

I love that you've leant into the bubbles! The production and mixing on this one is great as well. 

What a lovely jaunty piece! I really liked the interplay between the instruments and the weaving of the different ideas. It sounded to me that things were panned quite hard to either side, without much sitting in the middle, and those East West winds can do with a bit of EQ taming sometimes, especially when they are on their own.