A top entry, really great stuff! Fits the artwork well and develops in a really satisfying way. One small suggestion would be to shape those melodies even more (my advice is if you've think you've done a bit too much on that, then that's the right amount), but other than that this is a great piece!
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Thank you for the great feedback! Yeah, I would've liked to shape the melody some more with more ornamentations and whatnot. However, I was worried that making the melody more complex might overcomplicate what I felt should be a fairly simple melody to convey the timeless story of a tragic romance, so I opted to keep it fairly simple (plus I also started running out of time to mess around with the melody some more haha). I'd love to toy around with the main theme and see if I can find some nice ways to add more color without losing the original intent of the theme! Thanks so much again for listening, I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it!