Nice work! The production is generally good and the thematic material is well developed. I felt I wanted to hear more tragic elements to reflect the artwork though, and more harmonic development would have been good. I liked the choice of instrumentation, though the guitar sat too far on the right for the most part. Generally a lovely piece!
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Thank you very much for the feedback. The piece starts with tragic elements and then moves toward more "hopeful" sounds, because that's how I interpreted the illustration. For me, the detail of the two butterflies in the center is the key element that represents the resurrection of the two lovers and their eternal love.