Lovely stuff! The production quality on this one is top notch. You conveyed the general overall vibe of the artwork, but I was left wanting more. Perhaps something that moved towards the more tragic elements?
I had reached a point where I didn’t know how to move the melody forward, and I admit I don’t know much about music theory, but I’m satisfied with what I was able to achieve, hehe. The good thing is that I know I need to improve and start learning, but still, thank you!!