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Firstly, the artwork and music seem nice, everything is in proper place. The transition with the music as you change scenery is also a nice touch.

I feel like there is no gameplay at all. The choice of places seem arbitrary so I just went through all the places randomly. I also feel the choices of dialog seem to carry no consequences.
Since you mentioned of expanded dialog choices from 2-3 to 3-4... I don't think this addition matter that much at all. Having only two options but showing different consequences would be much more effective. For now, the different reactions that we get  is not enough. Since this is a VN, unlocking different background stories or have branching ending will be a better usage of the dialog options.

Another suggestion from me is to display the question when the player is presented with dialog options. This is just in case if the player go through the dialog pretty fast and didn't get the question.

On the race gameplay... coming into this, I was expecting a racing game where you drive the car, but I was wrong. It is quite frustrating when you car just bump into other cars and never overtake them. The only interactions are what looks like a nitro toggle on the bottom-right of the screen and it does speed up your car a bit, but not significant. I also don't really see the effect on toggling the aggressive/lax mode on the bottom-left of screen. The gameplay for the race itself is pretty non-existent at this stage, I hope you'll make some improvements on this in the future builds. More often than not, I get frustrated because you keep bumping into other cars and there's no way to control it out. Or worse, when there is a faster car bump into another opponent's car and pushing the slower car to move faster.

Another thing on the race, if I want to win I just select Porchat and it will just blaze through the race track. But if I choose the truck, I will just always lose.

I can't give any positive/negative judgment on the idea at this stage. It still a lot of work since you're mostly watching the race play out with no interaction. There is also not much to customize at the garage. One suggestion is maybe start with loads of money but only 1 basic car without any equipment first. Then let us choose which part to buy and install.

I think you did a decent job on the customization in the garage UI clarity. Everything is quite understandable on the get-go. One improvement point is you should show your available money in the garage screen. Player starts with $1000 but it is not communicated in the garage screen where you're actually buying for mods.

It seems a bug where there is no UI pop-up after you finish the second race. You are just stuck with the game looping until you reload/refresh the browser page. 

That's it for now, keep on working!

Screenshot of my truck getting stuck behind two other trucks:

On your opinion about the music, increasing intensity/tempo as the deadline is getting closer is a nice idea. I am putting that into my list. And yes, I agree these are all polish features and I intend to leave the music player at the current state for a while. There are more pressing issues to be addressed and core features to be implemented. The music I am using are all free under the creative common license, I should have that mentioned somewhere in the game page. Thanks for pointing it out. I will probably look into paid options some time further deep in the development, will definitely check out your suggestions.

I have just entered March's jam!
Looking forward to more development and playing everybody's games!

Thank you for playing the game and the thorough feedback!

I will definitely fix the things that you find frustrating, especially with things being not obvious when they can be built or not based on the ratings. I just implemented the ratings currency (EC, EN, and such) this month thus the very uncommunicative UI. (sorry, this is just my excuse, haha). You're right, I will try to make things more obvious for the future builds.

On pausing the game during establish, thanks for mentioning this. I have tried to make the game not punishing even when the time moves when choosing buildings. But I will keep this in mind on how to proceed next.

Interesting that you pointed out about the background music. I was thinking of mixing a different vibe every now then, thus there are some preppy music and mellow ones XD. 

Even with the game in a very buggy state, I really appreciate the time you took to play and leave a very thorough feedback.
I really wish moving on forward, there is a monthly jam like this for us to play each others' games and post a feedback to improve both our games!

Thank you for playing the game and the comment!Thank you for the very thorough feedback, particularly on the game communication (UI, indication, controls and such). I agree with you that most of the things are still not obvious and has to be worked out with several play, so I will definitely try to improve that on the next iteration. 

You can use right-click to cancel action and movement, but this is my fault for not communicating it enough on the tutorial. 

I am so glad that you could enjoy the game since it is still miles away from finish (thus the unbalanced gameplay). I am so worried that the victory condition is very lackluster at this stage since you only try to rack up points.

Again, thank you so much for playing the game and the wonderful feedback.
I really wish that moving forward, we can play and give each other feedback to improve both our games!

Woah, I did not expect to read a novel in this jam submission, haha!

SPOILERT ALERT!!! For others that haven't played the game

The amount of decision-making vs. story feels appropriate. I enjoyed having to choose a reaction based on others' actions. The pacing seems appropriate for now, but I think story beat can work being just a little bit faster. 

I did not enjoy the prologue scene because it feels like a short-cut to evoke tension that do not resolve in anything. Personally, I just hate dream scene in stories, it feels low-effort because you can just wake the person up and be done with it. Perhaps it would be better to just start the story from the morning you wake up. The weird dream can be included some time maybe after the day ends. I digress.

But overall, I enjoyed the demo and would love to see more

OK, I will keep your comments in mind with future review. it's good to know the intent of the developers so that the area of feedback can be more focused. If you are planning to do this like once every month, I would love to give some feedback on the feature you specifically just implemented or requested to review. 

Thank you also for hosting this kind of feedback jam thing. I feel we gamedevs are trapped in our own project for too long without any external opinion that it just warp our senses. It's just good to have an outlet for honest and constructive discussion in the early part of creative process.

I didn't read the tutorial so I played most of the game in day mode. But then I changed it to night mode, and then somehow get stuck in a place where I needed a key to get out and stopped playing. Honestly, it's a decently made block-moving puzzle game without the day and night mode.

At first, it is not really obvious what the "up" directional block is. But eventually I realized that it can be imagined as a locked door. But it not a big work to draw a "lock" sign instead of "up" arrow. Then after a while of playing, I did learn that you can push the X gray block to cover a whole and walk over it. Since the game was made for a jam, I guess the game design is passable even at the current state.

When I get the hang of the game, I think I cleared almost all the room in the "III" level (to the north of the beginning level). There is a particular moment where I felt smart on figuring out the consecutive holes and locked door puzzle. Mind you that I did this all in day mode. That's why I think the night mode is redundant unless there's a cool lore behind it.

Another note, there seems to be a room where you can't possibly enter since it is blocked by red teleporters. 

Overall, this is a decently made puzzle game and I enjoyed it

I was playing the classic 1P mode.

On game mechanics.. firstly, the objective is simple and easy to understand. But It seems that the control will get stuck for a while after you move 4 or 5 steps, and then the black-holes change place. After that you are allowed to move again, so the control does not feel responsive. Is this just me or is it because it's a web version? If it is indeed the game rule that you cannot move after a certain number of steps, it would be better if there's some animation to indicate that the space changing and the players cannot move.

For the appearance.. I am assuming that you're going for a trippy ambience simple game. Probably it's not worth mentioning, but more animation is needed, such as making the black-hole pulse or a quick interpolation on the player's movement will be effective. 

Overall impression, I imagine this will be a fun party game when everyone is drunk (O.o) and waiting for something.

Hi, thank you for your reply. 

Yes, I understand that a lot of the system in place are basic RPG system and will be refined as time goes. I hope I didn't come across as intrusive to the development of the game. I would love to have back-and-forth discussion on this if you don't mind. Just putting out thoughts as a consumer, so please take my comment with a grain of salt.  

But coming from a perspective of someone who like and used to play a lot of JRPG (same as you through the PS1 era), I expect to see a dramatic story, cool characters, or environment at the beginning of the game to get invested in. If you guys are indeed planning to do a full JRPG for the project, I think making a well-crafted story, with engaging plot, intriguing characters, or cool environment first (just for the beginning part)  would be the utmost priority for what you want to achieve? Implementing the battle, inventory or tutorial system seems to be secondary for the type of game you're aiming.

 I managed to reach the next village but got annihilated fighting the boss with the knight armor :D

This is such an ambitious scale for a game jam, The game still needs a TON of polish to make it appealing.  But,, I think you did a good job on implementing the basics for what looks like a turn-based RPG game.

Here are some of my thoughts:

- I feel the game is too relentless since I don't see any opportunity to heal between battles.

- Having to re-shuffle items when I don't see the one I want is frustrating. It feels like I am being punished for not doing anything wrong.  Since I am used to classic jRPG like Final Fantasy, being able to use all available items when acquired is just more natural (with the exception of FF Tactics) 

- Operating loot assignment after each battle is kinda confusing. The tutorial has too much text at too short period of time. Instead of text, I think adding auto-assignment to loot will make it simpler.

- Again, the initial tutorial is kinda long-winded. I am happy that you at least include the option to skip it. But making it shorter for the next iteration will be sweeter.

Just my two cents... If you are planning to make an RPG with epic story and such, I think you should first make the game less punishing and do less battles in-between story beats. Making your main characters as slime is very hard make it appealing, so it needs a LOT of polish to the visual to pull it off.  Right now, the slimes only differ in color so it's difficult to distinguish between who and who. 

Good luck!

No worries, it is just a minor issue.

I wasn't even thinking about pressing anything while the intro is playing! Probably I got used to just watching any cutscenes when playing games.

Noted. 

The boss level is confusing when pixelmaschine played it. So I really agree that it should be re-designed going forward.

Also, thank you for pointing out the frustrations with accidentally closing a door that you have unlocked.

Really appreciate your feedback!

The premise is cool and the idea of using fog-of-war in a management-sim game is neat.
It is such an ambitious genre to be made in a game jam though, so great work on making it to presentable stage!

It was quite confusing on what to do when the game starts. I wish there is a tutorial level that guide you through the UI and landscape. So, instead of being able to choose where to land, maybe it should've always landed in a fixed location with rich resources, because first-timers certainly don't know anything about the game yet. Or another suggestion is to be much more forgiving with the resources.

But overall, I like the idea of the game and would certainly want to a see more polished version of it.
The art itself is quite polished but the UI some more work (it's forgivable since this is a game-jam).

Great work!

I love the art and aesthetic of this game! It reminds me so much of the late 90's early 00's video games, particularly Pepsiman on PS1 where the NPCs are flat 2D sprites in a 3D world.  The character controller is also done well, roller-blading around is pretty fun.

Unfortunately, I can't comment on the gameplay since there it is almost non-existent. 
But this submission is a really cool proof-of-concept/prototype for the art and player controller.

I would definitely want to see a more fleshed out version of the gameplay with this atmosphere. 

Kudos on the submission!

Thank you for your feedback, glad you like the game!

Adding more player agency would be the design challenge that we would like to tackle next.

A cool interpretation on the theme.
The aesthetic is charming and overall the art looks very cohesive.
The tutorial is very helpful to the player to get immersive quick and knowing what to do.

My two cents, please take it with a grain of salt.... in further levels where it gets big, it can be off-putting not knowing where the packages and drop-zones are. Since the premise of the game is a delivery service, I feel the player should be able to to tell where things are in one glance (like a mini-map telling what is where). So the player can focus on strategizing which route to go first or which action to take first, not exploring the map. Delivery service shouldn't explore places, they should deliver things efficiently.
Edit: on further play, I discovered that you can zoom-out to locate things quicker. This did alleviate the frustrations I had. I still do wish to see how the game feel if we start each level with a zoom-out screen with the package and drop-zone locations.

All being said, this is a very solid submission!

As for the current state of the project, being a shipmate just going around and digging for stuff that you don't know where to look for is repetitive, however it does fit the game jam theme really well. You can make the repetitiveness bearable or even fun if you can make the player more "fun" to control (e.g. less clunky movement). The cartoonish-style is OK, although more polish on the animation would also help with alleviating the repetitiveness.

It also helps to have an indication on where you have dug as to avoid spamming dig without any purpose.

Good job on the theme interpretation.

Firstly, good visual style.
Then, interacting with the cat using both keyboard and mouse is really fun. Kudos on the controller implementation!

As have been mentioned in the description, there are some area that soft-locked me from progressing further. One between the shelf, and another one I got stuck on the floor (cannot jump) on the where there is a moving platform.

Personally, I think the intro text is a bit slow. But maybe this was deliberate.

For lighting, I wish the immediate area around the cat is a little brighter to illuminate the cat's line of sight. 

Overall, it's a nice little platforming game. Good job!

Thank you SnakenBacon for your feedback, we are glad that you like it!

Your idea of reversing the meter sounds cool!
We had an idea to only alter the properties of the cloud, i.e. hard/soft-ness, thick/thin-ness, etc to get the cloud into different forms with different abilities. Time didn't allow us to experiment with it though.

Yes, we should've included a level that forces the player to change MC's direction using Platform Cloud. Totally forgot about that while designing the levels ^^;

I love turn-based tactical games and I think the gameplay has a good premise. I would like to see how it plays when it is more fleshed-out. The gameplay communication is not clear enough though. Such as.. after being in shoot mode, you have the cross-hair icon, but after enemy and then back to your turn, the cursor icon got reset. And it's quite difficult to select the enemy soldiers and barb-wire. Cutting the barb-wire also lacks visual communication so I wasn't sure what was happening there. So clear gameplay communication would be the first thing I would wok on if I were in this project and would like to pursue further.

All being said, you really nailed the atmosphere, and sound is really good, I personally like the clicking noise that is played while toggling between shoot/move :D Overall, great job!

Some minor issues :)
When I hug the wall, I can see through the Unity's default skybox. Which itself is not a very bad thing, but it's just nicer if the players don't see that. 
Though I understand the surprise element in the game, it feels like it is still not a complete game yet because it doesn't come with a goals and challenges other than running around and shooting zombies. Maybe putting a little challenge for a single level may make the game feel more complete.

But overall, it's a good submission for a game jam! Also, nice job with the controls of the game! It is the first submission with first-person camera that doesn't make me feel dizzy. .. :)

Honesty is the best policy :) it is the quickest way for us to improve. Yeah, I didn't make it out the bedroom, I was busy trying out all the stuffs inside the bedroom and didn't think of checking out the door, honestly I thought the game is all happening just inside the room. But maybe you could communicate the goal of the game better next time.

Good job anyway with the game!

Thanks for the feedback Ian! It's apparent that we lack in environment art. :)

Thanks for playing the game! Hope that you enjoyed it.

Nice little strategy game there! It doesn't look like a fast-paced game at first, but I was wrong, haha. It was only until I read the description of the game that I understood what's going on. :) Maybe a good in-game description or tutorial will help a lot for future players. Some tweaks that could make an improvement to the game-play is adjusting the gold needed to build stuff and shoot, adding health to the base, etc.

Overall, it is a very good game!

P.S. Yup, I think it can be a good little mobile game, but of course it needs more polishing and some more contents. :)

I felt very dizzy after playing, maybe because the camera shifts so fast and the object just started flying around randomly inside the room after you release clicking. Also, I didn't get what the game is about. The only thing that happens is the lamp jumping all over the place while the bed enlarging and shrinking, which in itself is a surprise at first.

Aside from those things, nice art-style and thanks for the amazing music and sound effect! Overall a good experience, except for the dizziness. :)

Haha, nice concept there, although I don't think this is considered a game because there's no goals, rules, or challenges. But that aside, I love the atmosphere of just sitting beside the window with relaxing music. The idea of being able to view different cities at once is out of the world. It's more like a piece of interactive art for me rather than a game, but it's still amazing nonetheless! 

A really nice submission! I enjoyed playing the game though I got very dizzy because of the screen-shake of the shotgun. I wonder if this game is inspired by Vlambeer's games. :)

It's very hard to get to the upper platform. When the flood started, I just couldn't get up and get killed every time. I still don't know what will happen if all the machines are operated though. But nice touch with the warning, it did give me a surprise factor and prompt me to act quicker.

My suggestions for the game, please tone down the screen-shake a bit. And polish on the platforming more.

Seriously though, nice artwork and sound, this is a very polished game for a game jam!

Really great visuals there. Unfortunately, the game feels very "laggy" for me. And also, although the control is simple, it is so hard to maneuver the vehicle. For example, once you hit a wall, you have to go backwards, but after that, it's hard for me to go forward again. 

Just for a bit of improvement, I think first improve upon the control and make it intuitive. And then maybe optimize the game so that it doesn't feel laggy.

But you did capture the feeling of Christmas very well with the art style, great job!

Thanks for the comment.

If you walk up close enough to the rabbit and suddenly appear in front of him, the rabbit will be slightly surprised. That's why you can scare him.

Thank you for playing!

Thanks for the comment, glad that you enjoyed it!

Maann.. I really hope to play more of this game. It's okay, I accepted the cake.

Here's my only suggestion for the game: there needs to be a visual indicator for objects that can be interacted with. Other than that, I really hope to enjoy the finished story. Overall, cool submission! Cheers!

Thank you for the nice comment, ^.^! Glad you enjoyed the game!

Thank you for the suggestion! "Fast-forward through wall of text feature" - noted.

Thanks for the comment and suggestions! We'll make sure to tone down the text on the next game/jam. Also, I learn that players want to see/get feedback from every action they choose. Again, thanks for the suggestion!

Sometimes, I am shown the wrong ranking. Other than that, really nice submission!

Really cool game!

Here's some suggestions from me to improve the game:

• Objects that can be "lasered" should have different visuals.
• Cancelling the laser should be made immediately after right-click has been pressed, to make the gameplay smoother.
• Enable camera panning so that players can look ahead a few meters (or whatever the dimensions in the game) than the enemies. It feels impossible to pass the boss when I played it.

Hopefully, you will continue to work on the game or at least polish the game a bit more before starting on a new project. I feel that this can be a great game when polished. Cheers!