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I really loved your game! I replayed it around ~10 times, so the replayability value for me is excellent. I kept on wanting to see if there was a good end and a bad end for each stat. 

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First: I died hungry and alone, even though I used my physical might to "escape" the alchemist. That was a bummer. Second: I died of old age, happy, after sparing the mice who fell in love with each other. The Baron mice were frikken adorable. I liked the fact that it was actually possible to escape the alchemist's place. Third: I died of poisoning, after using my charm to convince the alchemist to spare me. There were a lot of spelling mistakes, so I guessed this must have been where you were rushing. No biggie, though. Also, that alchemist has problems. Four: I used magic to battle the alchemist and died with her. I actually laughed aloud, it was kind of unexpected.

I won't bore you with the contents of the other runs, either because they were the same or unfruitful. What I gathered is that someone close to the alchemist (wife?) died and that sacrificing a (consenting?) living being  is the key to bring her back. I found it interesting that the only way I found to escape successfully involved sparing the mice. Only with the help of others did we escape. 

I would have liked to see if the potion succeeded in the bad ends, where we died! But other than that, an excellent game. The graphics were wonderful, and all-in-all, top marks.

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Thanks a lot for your extended feedback. That was very interesting to read :) And I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Also thanks for pointing out the spelling errors. Yep, I did rush in several places, a lot. It helps to know which area I should check next to fix spellings and stuff.

I originally planned to write a short recap in the afterlife, to show what happens with the potion (also adding more option to tamper with the potion for different endings there). But... I ran out of time. Might add this after the rating phase has ended, because there is still a bunch of backstory and options in my notes and head which I didn't manage to include.