Thanks a lot for your extended feedback. That was very interesting to read :) And I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Also thanks for pointing out the spelling errors. Yep, I did rush in several places, a lot. It helps to know which area I should check next to fix spellings and stuff.
I originally planned to write a short recap in the afterlife, to show what happens with the potion (also adding more option to tamper with the potion for different endings there). But... I ran out of time. Might add this after the rating phase has ended, because there is still a bunch of backstory and options in my notes and head which I didn't manage to include.