Good fun, love the way your choices of words conveyed the tone of the character's grandiose self-pity.
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Reflecting with a Red (OPR Writing Jam 10)'s itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Adherence to Theme | #5 | 3.962 | 4.040 |
| Overall | #6 | 3.896 | 3.973 |
| Flow & Clarity | #8 | 3.922 | 4.000 |
| Concepts & Originality | #28 | 3.805 | 3.880 |
Ranked from 25 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Comments
Very well done! One of my absolute favorites in this jam. The play on words with "cattle-ised" was especially clever. Loved the ending too. Feeling of inevitability. Wonderful read!
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One of ConsequenceI don't normally stay for vampiric stories but this one was a gem. I love the premise of the lord's appreciation of his own demise! The details really put me in his kingdom and fleshed out the setting!
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The PeacekeeperReally good story! I loved the point of view from the Vampire Lord, plus the whole narration was just excellent.
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The Way HomeGotta love a good evil vampire! A lamentable circumstance to be sure.
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Pale and BrokenYour ability to thoroughly entrench a consistent personality that just screams "Dickish Vampire Noble" throughout the whole story is amazing. The first person perspective of a memoir fits a narrative of his final thoughts, and is an excellent portrayal of his retrospection on what lead him to his fate. Any complaints I could have would only be nitpicks. This was a wonderful story, bravo!
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