Not many story driven games out here, this one is cool.
I would add more sounds effects, camera shakes and other things to improve the immersion and make it really feel like we are inside his head.
Yeah sound effects and music was the last thing to be put in, due to time restrictions we really focused on gameplay.
We plan to do quite a big update of this game after the jam to improve a lot of features we find lacking and SFX and music is high on that list XD