It’d be very useful to have the fact that this is a mothership adventure somewhere in the module text itself. Very cool ideas in here. Very difficult to read mostly due to the dark textures used behind the small text.
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I agree, but since The Great Crossing Heresies isn't an officially licensed 3rd party product (yet!), I erred on the side of caution and decided not to cite the product.
Thanks for the readability feedback. I'm in the process of developing this as a gatefold pamphlet with slightly larger text, and I'll lighten the backgrounds by another 5%.