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A jam submission

The Great Crossing HeresiesView project page

Stranded at Marcion's Abbey during a Storm, discover the monk's heresies. A 4-fold pamphlet adventure for Mothership RPG
Submitted by ChrisAir (@ChrisAiriau)
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Timely - is the proposed adventure suitable as a one-shot?#15.0005.000
Originality - does the adventure contain original plot and situations?#44.0004.000
Presentation - is the game material good looking?#53.0003.000
Completeness - does the adventure contain all the material to be played?#54.0004.000
Clarity - is the structure of the adventure clear enough?#63.0003.000
Overall#63.8003.800

Ranked from 1 rating. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Submitted(+1)

It’d be very useful to have the fact that this is a mothership adventure somewhere in the module text itself. Very cool ideas in here. Very difficult to read mostly due to the dark textures used behind the small text.

Developer(+1)

I agree, but since The Great Crossing Heresies isn't an officially licensed 3rd party product (yet!), I erred on the side of caution and decided not to cite the product.
Thanks for the readability feedback. I'm in the process of developing this as a gatefold pamphlet with slightly larger text, and I'll lighten the backgrounds by another 5%.