Thank you for the feedback - I'm sorry it fell too short for you, though if it is any consolation the complete demo as just been released with the final three routes ^_^
To answer your questions, kisses and shows of affection will mostly be cut away, since I plan for there to be lots of them, but of course, I will have at least one CG for a 'kiss scene' since I understand that people like them.
Hmm, I'll look into the menu choice text colour and see if I can find something easier to read then.
As for any typos, yes, I would hope to catch them all before the full game release, though if you want to help, please feel free to send me any you find to firstname.lastname@example.org.
Thanks for playing and I'm glad you enjoyed it so far