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Hey cufflink!

Was wondering if you'd be willing to work on a slightly different kind of project (IF/interactive fiction). We have a Unity programmer already on board who's building the code from the ground up, and - - not only would it be great to get some more help for them -- but we'd also like someone who specializes in UI (menus, icons, gen aesthetic, etc.). We have a solid idea of what we're going for (I have a background in design), but need someone to not only implement it -- but run with it. Excited and giving even - More - suggestions on how it could be better!

This project is revshare, however (you'll get a percentage of any made rev depending on your contribution + keeping any tips with a linked kofi) If this sounds like something you might be interested in, I'd love to connect via discord (where I can also provide more info on the project itself!) It's definitely a good fit if you're looking for something smaller~

Hello again! Just an update: I've found a dedicated 2D artist, so we're currently set on our team. I'm sorry we couldn't have connected on discord sooner -- but if any other spots open up in future, I'll definitely shoot you a message.
I truly appreciate you wanting to contribute to my project and hope you'll support (in an equally important way) its tumblr/game page/release once it comes out! :)

Awesome! Request - sent~

Sounds great! Love a multi-skilled! :D I'd just need you to focus on character art (mainly the 4 ROs intro portraits) atm, as we have a 2nd programmer on the team. Shall we talk more on discord(you can find me by my username)? Would love to see examples of your 2D art!

Hi Yuzu! Thanks for the interest~

Currently, we have no need for music + sound effects/are primarily looking for a 2D artist; though, this has been something I considered as a possibility in future. It wouldn't be as prevalent as in a VN, but even with an IF -- it might be cool to have tailored music for 'heart moments' with the ROs, that fit them/the moment specifically. That's a long way out, however lol
Will absolutely keep you in my contacts/in mind if we decide to commit! 

Thanks for getting back to me~ I wasn't able to send a friend request with what you gave, but you can add me by this name on discord, instead. :)

Hey there! I don't mind beginners at all (this is my first IF!) -- so long as you're committed and willing to put in the WERK, that's plenty. :)

Can I ask what you specialize in/feel you could contribute?

Hi tombjuice!

Love your style! Would you be interested in learning more about my project? Currently looking to get intro character art for 4 ROs.
The game will be revshare, so there's potential monies your way if you'd like to link a kofi/something similar(you will absolutely be getting an artist credit as well).

Hey Ib!

Since you mentioned being flexible, was wondering if you were interested in potential revshare/having your kofi(comparable) linked to my game page in exchange for services? (This could turn into future paid services for 'membership content'/specific scenes as the game is already gathering quite a bit of interest) 
Love your style and essentially just need intro character art (can be sketchy/actually love sketchy styles) for 4 ROs.

Giving this a bump -- if there's any 2D (mainly character) artists or programmers with UI experience (can be basic!) in unity, hit me up! Looking forward to hearing from you!! <3

Hi Hiro!

Confused since your title has 'offering' -- are you looking for paid projects or willing to work on revshare/unpaid ones, as well?
(P.S. Love your style -- if the latter, would really go with theme of my game/would love to work with you~)

Hey, iridscnt!

We're actually on the hunt for a new 2D artist (our current one, unfortunately, had a major health scare)! My game is an IF (interactive fiction), so it sounds like it would be perfect for what you're looking for/starting off light. Our former artist was working on individual art of the 4 ROs, so that would be your priority (i.e. these will be their intro images with their descriptions); there would be no CGs, in the traditional sense -- but if you wanted to make group shots/more artistic scenes, I'd be all for it. If you'd like to stay on + feel the vibe, that would be fab! Or, if you just want to do some one-offs for your portfolio -- that works too!
The game will be revshare, so there's potential monies your way if you'd like to link a kofi/something similar(you will absolutely be getting an artist credit). Will send a friend request if you're interested!

Hi Baskie!

Was wondering if you'd be willing to work on a slightly different kind of project (IF/interactive fiction) which is very active at the moment. We have a Unity programmer already on board who's building the code from the ground up, and - - not only would it be great to get some more help for them -- but we'd also like someone who specializes in UI (menus, icons, gen aesthetic, etc.).

If this sounds like something you might be interested in, I'd love to connect via discord (where I can also provide more info on the project itself!) We're very much about putting in 'the work' here ;D

Let me know -- thanks!

HOLY CANNOLI, RI - you continue to be an Inspiration lol

Honestly, I can say I appreciate IF writers so much MORE now that I'm writing my own (the branching/variations can be a beeeeeeeetch XD -- but so freakin gratifying to see come together). And you're also doing your own coding! Mad respect.

Happy to hear everything's progressing well - FINISH STRONK. 💪🏾 And I hope you're staying hydrated with this crazy (soon to be returning)weather!! <3

Thank you for following my IF~ 🥲🫂

FYI: If there are any (primarily)artists/writers who are interested in joining up on this project, we're now looking to fill a recently vacated spot!

And, the official tumblr page is up!! 🎉🌈 Click here for more info on the game!

Hi Hira! Thank you for inquiring!

I just brought on another team member as a secondary writer + artist (and I do the main bulk of the writing myself), so we don't currently need any more writers. However - this is looking to be a pretty big/involved project (with a LOT of branching); if that changes in future and the need to delegate more arises, I'll def keep you in mind!

Best of luck to you! <3

All right! I gave myself: 'weekend treat' and read Pt2 (before getting back to werk) - doing a separate post since I have quite a bit!

Gaaaaawwwd - why am I so - - GAY for Izzie?!? Every time she SPEAKS, I am BEAMING
Izzie, it is PRIDE: COUPLE WITH MEEEEEEHHH XD Particularly loved her banter with Scarlette in the game - they have such fun vibes~ "I know, and I'm very patiently waiting for that to change." <— SAME.

(also - not me getting JEALOUS every time Iz - LOOKS AT THEOOOO) No lie, I thought-whinned: ‘Look at MEEEEEE, Izzieeeeee’ XD — AND THEN, SHE DID, AND I - LOST MY SH** 🤣Can't help but wonder if Izzie ever looks at MC when they’re having a moment with who they're coupled with - and has regrets? 

Izzie screaming out of the way: I also found it really interesting how Mattie truly closed up during the game(almost - surprisingly so); how often she didn’t say anything when going through the different choices. How much she chose to keep. There's nothing wrong with that, oc; but as you said: It's telling.

Honestly - all the banter is so good/witty(it’s not easy writing group scenes and - catching all the things/making everyone feel involved in their own meaningful way!). I don’t watch TV - and esp not reality TV, but I feel like I would if the cast came off as intelligently/chemistry as this!

"Never have I ever," you say, "broken up with someone I actually liked because I got scared." <— Loved this one (and CHOSE IT); what a Great freakin question(w/ - equally fab result~)

Also - awww: The threesome question got scrapped (I loved that one XD)
On that note - while I liked all the questions MC could potentially ask, I kinda missed the more fun versions you could do before -- like faking an orgasm. There is body count one — which does what I was looking for in its own specific way - divert and lighten the mood - but it felt like the only one in a sea of HEAVY.

(Something I wondered throughout playing the game: If we got the ‘you don’t drink - but you SHOULD' option; does that mean any of the others lied/didn’t drink when they should have? 👀🧐)

Slightly on that note: Can we get an option that determines what we’re drinking? I think being vague/open about it - outside of a drinking game - is fine, but when in one, having a ‘you’re drinking whatever you’re drinking’ a few times, just feels - odd. I’d want a proper option my MC chose (and to know the consequences from it - i.e. water vs. whiskey)

Reading-wise, as a critique: I would say - try to watch how many times the ROs do a specific action (like: Noah with the can on his knee or Amber looking at the garden through the glass doors) As the reader, I appreciate repetition: It shows that that movement is important/contextual clue. But if I see it too much, it’s diminishing returns. It loses its power. Show us other ways of those characters doing small somethings that - gives things away about them.

And finally, a few screenies for things I found:


This was another repetition thing: 'someone refills a glass' was used a LOT during this part. I'll give it to you that it would happen quite a bit given the circumstances, but again - finding new ways to say the same thing would be appreciated here.


It feels like you're mentioning Izzie drinking twice here (unless the first mention is just her picking up the glass, but not drinking? If so, I would just add that for clarity.)

Hope this helps~ 

I love your username. Just had to start with that. lol <3

Thank you for your interest/reaching out! I actually (literally) just added another member to the team not that long before your lovely note (and they're still in the throes of catching up/we'll see how + where their talents shine most in our lil unit) -- but I'm always here for taking a willingly offered hand. Two of the members of the team are also working on other projects, so if you can offer dedicated time to mine (even if you also work on others/your own) - that would only be helpful!

However: The only thing I could think of at this point, is kinda like what I offered to another here(and it wasn't what they were looking for) -- a more advisory role. Which - touches everything. Kind of like an advising project manager. It doesn't necessarily mean you wouldn't be doing things in the traditional sense (depends on how much time you'd like to commit), like we all are, but I would love the wisdom that comes from a person who's already made games. I'd want you to spot potential pitfalls you might see coming; or tell my lil ambitious baby heart I'm 'doing too much' with so and so nth branching scene - and here's why. ;) (I've seen some reviews you've left others on their games, and I think you'd be great at it.)

Happy to chat more on discord/share my vision if you're interested in the above. Will add - hope you've had a lovely day too~

Love that you had fun writing it! I feel like (as a reader) you can *feel* that sort of thing~ It comes through in the writing!

I mean - tbf: It's in American culture, too (don't know where you're coming from) -- and seems to mean the same thing: If you 'clock' something/someone, you've 'read' them. You see them for what they are (even if they may be trying to hide it ;)).

AAAAaaaaaaaaaAAAAH - Chantelle!! WHY would you do this when I need to write my OWN IF?!?! (kidding, but also - DAMN, the temptation.... XD)

In all seriousness: Can't wait to read revamped ver of this scene (I personally love dialogue-driven moments, where it's just - people bouncing off each other - so I already know I'll have a good time~)
P.S. also - been seeing some of the AI comments, and I - cannot put into words how messed up this 'witch hunt' mentality is.
You are an amazing writer. I have - not ONCE - ever thought you've used AI -- Ever. And: You don't owe them ANYTHING. <3

Hello, hello~! Thanks for taking the time to leave this! :D

Like I mentioned in an earlier response: Our team already has a coder/programmer who decided to use a completely ground-up method instead of twine. So, we're good there/won't be using it. However(!), since you mentioned wanting to learn, that could be a potential convo between you and him (maybe a 'learn as you do' type thing) if he ever needs a helping hand/you're up for that!

But there's plenty else to dig into: We also have a member who prefers focusing on the art, but also dabbles in writing. I saw you do art + music - so, if the mood hits/you wanna go that way, that, too, is an option!
I personally handle the bulk of the writing/planning/branching/game + promo imagery, etc., etc. - beyond code bleh, I likely have a hand in it. lol  I essentially don't like to waste people's talents -- if you're passionate about this kind of project and you wanna WERK, I will grant this wish. Having another person helping with writing related things would be amazing -- as you mentioned, being a sounding board, helping with lore/worldbuilding/romance -- all of it. The main ROs are beautifully fleshed out at this point, but I'm making quite a few side characters that are very important to the general story/plot, and if you'd like to help out, that'd be huge!

(Also - YES. 100% would LOVE having another disabled/queer/POC/trans member; I'm striving for authenticity/sensitivity in this IF - but I personally can't be everything (nor, should I be), so having other voices to color those lived experiences is a BIG Plus.)
Will send a discord request - if all this sounds like your jam -- happy to talk more!

I already know this will be amazing because you're such a Fantastic writer~
Congrats on the (early!)release and can't wait to dig in! ❤️

Thanks for reaching out! <3

We have someone on coding who decided to team up/completely make a system by scratch (which is pretty epic). However - all are welcome! Content-wise: we're covered, so that's perfectly fine. A person who's made IFs before, like yourself,  however, would have invaluable experience in all phases of getting one out there. Will reach out via discord, but if you'd be interested in an advisor role/branching+stats expert, would love to have you!

Hey Lizzy! You're *Def* qualified. In fact -- you're Overqualified, I can't hire you - sorry. (kidding) XD

Sapphic content *IS* lacking, isn't it? I mean - it's 20-freakin-26. What are we doing? But (sadly) you can say the same about every other category I listed in my intro. We NEED to show more than one flavor (looking at YOU, VANILLA), again and again.
I wouldn't mind having another writer/artist on board (would love to see some of your stuff~)! I'll be doing the main bulk of the writing as that's what I always assumed my role would be; but - depending on how involved you want to get, you can do something as light as handle scene transitions or something as heavy as owning and writing one of the ROs, if you vibe. And, obvs, it'd be nice to have someone to talk shop with. I don't know if writing in 'American English' is going to be an issue for you? But that's something we can work around.

Reaching out on discord -- would love to tell you more of what I have in mind for this project! <3 P.S. your username is EVERYTHING~

Hello future partner(s)!

I have an idea (that’s how it starts - no~?) for an IF (interactive fiction) I’d like to finally commit to. I’m a writer (+ occasional artist) who’s been at it since 15, (furiously)scribbling in yellow legal pads. I’ve written everything from fanfic to academic papers (that were published, if you prefer a flex ;)). Considered doing an IF, off and on, for a while, but always talked/thought myself out of it. Now - I finally wanna take that leap and dedicate the time as I think I have a story/vision worth not only completing — but putting out there.
It’s still in the beginning stages — which is exciting — because that means it’s open enough for ideas from anyone who might want to join in. You’ll be more than just a sounding board: (if willing!)You’d be actively sculpting this game alongside me. Currently have a working title, theme, general plot, and basic love interests deets down. Haven't settled on program platform yet (but looked at choice script), so any expertise there would be Much Appreciated!

What I'm About/Looking to Achieve: I want to *see* what I DON’T see often enough in what’s already out there. More PoC (specifically: Women of Color); trans, nonbinary, ace - etc. (here for it all); sensitively and accurately portrayed disabilities (mental or physical); more sapphic/WLW content. Period. Love humor, but I'm fearless weaving in hard-hitting/uncomfortable topics. I don’t want readers stat checking every 5 seconds to get a certain RO. I think approval-mance can be great — but rival-mance is RARE in games and I want to change that. You shouldn’t NOT be able to romance someone with low approval - it should just be More effort/Different. 

If this sounds like something you’d be interested getting on board with, hit me up -- in the replies to start (with a little about you/passions/fun facts/bad puns). Looking for intros/what *you're* about - before moving to discord.

Whether super experienced or dipping your toes for the first time — I don’t really care, so long as the result/dedication is there. This would be a passion project (unpaid); but if there’s revenue generated once out there: Absolutely - 100% - open to share. I’m only fluent in English, but I don’t think language should be a barrier: If you’re willing to use translation tools, don’t hold back.
Mostly looking for people who genuinely enjoy code side of things (I know my lane, that ain't it lol) and/or find it fun to offer really engaging/unexpected branching. But if this resonates with you and you’re open to experimentation/less tread paths — writer, artist, whatever!— feel free to drop a note.  Let's make something exciting together~

Thanks + looking forward,
LG/leogrl

OHH!!??! :D *click click clickity clicks* (thank youuu and super 'GRATZ on 4K+ followers 👏🏾🎉)

'Ashley does have her fans, but when I did a popularity poll on my patreon she came last out of the main characters 😓' <-- I'm actually shocked - Well. lol I'm not, given Ashley's only main you can't 'add to harem'. People want 'love/neat' ending. When things are more open-ended or complex, it tends to be less popular; but - that's *My* sweet spot~ (Love wife lore, btw - that's so awesome!! Ashley's in my top 3 -- with Scarlett and Hannah -- so she should be Proud!!)

It's funny (but also fitting - since Ash isn't about labels(SAME.)): if you showed Ashley and MC with zero context, I'm sure most would assume they're in a relationship/in love. So - what defines a 'relationship' beyond perception -- either by the people in it or the ones observing it? Not to get too philosophize 😝 But that's what makes me like Ashley's route so much -- beyond, what I previously mentioned. The idea of just - being in something that doesn't need to be a - 'thing'. There's no need to point at it and say: 'This is Mine.' It is; without societal performance.

'I figured most people would go for the threesome' <-- fair lol But I will say, the reason I did it is b/c I felt genuine chemistry between all three (1) and it felt like a beautiful example of non-monogamy, beyond just lust. Not just b/c it was hot. I genuinely liked 1-on-1 with MC/Ash; if there was no threesome, it would have been just as good.

Can I ask one more (slightly obsessed) question? Why was it Ashley preferred being called that instead of 'Ash' by MC? That felt - significant. When very close friend calls her 'Ash'. But I didn't want to put more there than what it was (I JUS WANNA BE - SPECIAAAAL XD)

....wait - you wrote that like there's not many?? (are there NOT many??? 🤯) Because: I will HOLD THIS ENTIRE ASHLEY HOUSE BY MYSELF XD

Honestly, love all the girls: you just did that well writing them all. But Ash is up there for me. I adore her - the Sexy + Confidence. And - women completely Open with/Accepting their own Sexuality?  💯 Encore. No notes.

Speaking of bae: Time for thinky thoughts!! (enter enter for spoilers~)

‘what is HApPenINg??’ LOL Of COURSE. NATURALLY - *this* is how last Ash scene starts (God, I love herrr XD)

And you gave us a MINI GAME, you Absolute GODDESS. Pool scene was one of my favs, so I wondered how you’d top it — but, CLEARLY, I needn't bother cuz - *gestures* A public edging game while - swapping sexy stories? Never CHANGE, chekkin. 🥹

Something about Ashley… she knows Exactly how to drive me Insane (Art Keeds, amirite? ;)) -- and - AAAH - the way she looked at MC, with that lil smile, after - so: WARM AND TENDER — MAH ENTIRE HEART 
You really are a Master at those: subtle lil ‘smitten’ moments, without having to say a word. I love body language showing those sorts of things and you employ it so damn well -- and Differently! -- amongst all the girls.

I knew the moment I saw preview image with MC, Ashley + 3rd chick threesome was gonna happen. lol *Will* admit there was a moment I thought Beth would just leave -- but (I know you too well XD) you did NOT disappoint. Also - Beth just seemed the type to be more than up for it, les be real <3

Still! I appreciate (but am not surprised) you giving us a choice. As much as I was down to pound with three, I also went back and did option where it was just Ash/MC because that’s super sweet and ro ro, too (the air just led there and I was delighted Ashley wanted MC alone just as much)~ All three of them just having a grand ol time, kissing and touching each other was so good, I actually forgot the strap was the main dish LOL Beth Beth is a sweetie~ and the - DIRTY TALK GAME - oof (STAHP MAKING IRRESISTIBLE CHARACTERS 🤣)

(Can I also 'say' I’m PROUD of BB MC — so CONFIDENT, NOAWWW) Also liked how Beth and Ashley had flower theme~ Thought it was a cute touch to show their closeness/friendship 🌼

‘What if I’m broken?’ - HOW DARE YOU MAKE ME CRY, MA’AM - IT IS PRIDE hahaha And MC’s response was PERFECT; EXACTLY how I Feel. I am 100% Down Bad for Ash, but I have *NEVER* wanted her to compromise herself because of it. Me/MC love her BECAUSE of who she is — never in spite of it. So glad that’s what happened here and not the typical/appeasing 'i love you's. I’m sure this was so Beautiful/Uplifting for all the non-monos out there. LIVE YO TRUTH

I do wonder, though (for science) - would Ashley be against people falling in love with her? Like, zero expectation/pressure for that to be returned, but it just -  happening. B/c my MC is all the way there, but wouldn’t want to make her uncomfortable.

This was everything I hoped for(--and More!) for Ashley's 6th; bittersweet, but so worth the wait. I feel like Ashley being the last to get here just - hits right~
Can't believe all the girls are complete now!! What a JOURNEY! I really hope there's at least one last party scene (you keep outdoing yourself/I love them so muuuch)! But, however you end it, just know this has been incredible and I truly hope you're (Aggressively)patting yourself on the back. ❤️👏🏾

P.S. saw two small typos (well done for only that!):

....was waiting for someone to comment on this lol

AAAAAAAAAAaaaaaAAAAAh - ASHLEY SCEEEENE!!! (it's cool, I'm cool - I'm totally - - NORMAL ABOOT THISSS)

And just in time for PRIDE. you LEGEND 🌈 I already know you Nailed it so -- thank you for the Meal in advance~ ;)
Also: 'emo Hannah' - say. LESS. 👀🖤 All the new photo outfits sound fun; and always happy to get more bb girl Scarlett. Will make sure to leave feedback after I play!!

You're very welcome!

And - fair enough re: 'rather than' + 'settle'. Keep in mind, though - out of those 400K words, unless you have them back-to-back, right after each other, I'm not really noticing it. Sometimes: you just gotta use the word you wanna use. Not saying you shouldn't look to trim if you can, but it's also easy to get kinda - obsessed over it and then you're missing forest for trees.
TL;DR: You're doing Great, sweetie 😂

All right! Just finished re-read - this is what I got:

I definitely noticed you trimmed the fat with the interactions/each intro — and you’re right: Nothing significant was lost. It reads very smooth; the pacing matches that of a conversation happening with continuously added people. You nailed it.

I would ‘say’ if you’re conscious against too much repetition, the words ‘fractional’ and ‘recalibrate’ (or versions of it) are used quite often describing each ROs reactions. It’s not taking away anything; I like both words and how you use them - - but if you want to give yourself a fun challenge, you could find synonyms that hit the same way (or - different, but beautifully so).

A few in-game things I found:


(the slashes around "Please")

You use Mattie's name before she's introduced herself; it felt omnipotent in a way I didn't feel with the others.

I noticed Mattie did a very similar thing to Scarlette’s bit, during her intro - the not-quite-smirk, the barely there drink tip — is that intentional? (i.e. I wouldn’t mind seeing something more unique/just for her.)

Hopefully that's helpful~ Great job, again!

I appreciate that - re: critiques! But like I wrote: I genuinely didn't have so big an issue with it that I thought it warranted bringing up; but if others (clearly) did, then that's their opinion and valid too. But, I do think at the end of the day: It's Your story. You should have final say on what you think should change and what truly warrants it being 'for the better'.

I will def re-read now that I know (honestly not big on/super active with socials) and happily share my opinion if you like. As for the others: it could be wanting to wait until the next update is finished to restart. Now that it's announced here, maybe more will do the same.

I think that was a very mature decision regarding 'verbose'-ness of character intros/MC reads. I personally loved them -- I love how observant the MC comes across; was a delight each time they clocked a subtle cue. But I can absolutely agree it did, at times, get repetitive. Interested in re-playing to see how your edits change things.

Never Have I Ever!! (I remember that lol) It was quite illuminating/fun in the previous version, so looking forward -- esp since you got so many good suggestions for rounds~
May seemed to be a really good month, so - here's hoping June's just as fruitful for you/this IF! (It's also, literally, beginning of Summer, so that has to be some karmic/good vibes default ;))

Don't forget to take breaks/pace yourself, darling! Esp since writing those kinds of scenes takes such a toll. You're truly amazing for keeping up with all those variables/not wanting to give us a watered down experience with reused text -- but if that means this takes you more time to release this chapter, I'd much rather wait than for you to burnout.
(If you can work on any of those future lighter moments as a breather, that might help too!)

Best of luck with + congrats on overseas internship, hun (that's exciting)!! There's def an adjustment period and you must always do what's best for you. ❤️

Beyond that: yaaay (possibly belated) b-day gift with next chapter~

haha I think all us K fans(masochists) understood the assignment (i.e. Knew we weren't gonna get a kiss in Book 1 since ET made it clear); what we *Weren't* prepared for, I think, is how K: ABSOLUTELY DECIMATED us, despite that. Silly me, thinking there'd be some FLUFF crumbs 😂🫠

....what a chapter to be a Calliope-mancer. 🫠🥲 (she wrote vaguely and intentionally lol)

The music paired so well with this one--truly, well done. You couldn't have sent us off on a better note. Sending all the Good VIBES for your upcoming surgery/smooth recovery. Take all the time you need~