Thanks for play my game. If you op to save the vampire, yo need go to their house and look at the people sitting in the table, then, leave the house an scene will started. I hope you finish the game. There's a guide in the game rar if you get stuck.
Answering your cons
1-The vampire doesn't need to hide that he is a vampire, you will know why if you finish the game. The problem of the main character must be revealed from the beginning, therefore, there is no motivation for the player to do anything, why should I hide it? I wouldn't play a game if they don't give me a goal.
2-about too many options, its a taste of the player, there's people that has told me that likes game like that ,investigative and have many options, other doesn't like.
3- the guidelines was:
- The player must be able to control a character across a map, be it the hero, a monster or anything else.-the game has it
- There has to be some kind of activity that allows for character progression, be it slaying monsters, brewing potions or reading books. -Progression is in base conversacion and investigation, so it has.
- The player must be able to obtain items throughout the game, so your game should have some sort of inventory mechanics or something on that line.- the game has it