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Oh goodness, Thank you sooo much for all of these compliments! Really happy you enjoyed it!!!

I will def check that you! I've been looking for new stuff to read anyway :P

I've realized about the font issue on the links. I think this is specific to that font more than the coding, cause it seems to be working fine with the other fonts in there. I'll look into a different font to swap with when I look into updating it.

Noted about the dialog. I've been trying to stay away from say/said, since I tend to use it too much, but I think I wen too far :P

For the stats: it's normal. This was the last thing I coded, the update going like just before the deadline. I just wanted to have pretty stats bar that works when picking stuff, but didn't put any thought on the numbers behind it. (the numbers go up or down depending on your choices, but there is a random element between days that influence it as well. It's not weird to getting too many points with one option and going over the line. That should get fixed when I sit down with the game and think of a better rating system.

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I think you'll find a lot of established writers recommend that - even if it feels boring - sticking with said is best 90% of the time. I've always found this post (https://www.quickanddirtytips.com/education/grammar/he-said-she-said) particularly instructive on that topic. Don't worry about it too much, I promise!

And totally understood with the ratings system. That kind of thing is tough to implement, so I'm glad you tried and have thoughts on how to rework it.

Oh thanks for the resource! Always looking in way to improve my writing anyway :P